[Denied][Human] Fafnir Ravenhood

[Raven8768 16]

       Out-Of-Character Information


The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.


What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - corbeldl

How old are you?: - 9

What time-zone do you live in?: - unknown



Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes many rp servers and in mmo like wow

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - yes



How did you hear about us?: -my cousin

What do you think the server will be like? - fun rp with my friends

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - always being in character



Definitions


This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know
about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that
you write the reply in your own words, not Google’s.


What is roleplaying?: - acting as someone else as in i am a different role


What’s metagaming?: - knowing info such as names of random strangers that your character would not otherwise know


What’s powergaming?: - giving yourself maximum power to be too strong and also acting with a power such as *casts power that nobody will live through and everyone will die* instead of *attempts to cast magic* in other words it is doing something without giving the other character time to react or try to defend themselves


In-Character Information


Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable!
Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with
a character that you actually want to play.


What’s your character called?: - Fafnir Ravenclaw


What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human


What sex are they?: - male


How old are they?: - 27


Give us a brief description of their life
- their story, childhood, family: - Fafnir was born in a town called
Salvus. He was 15 when he trained to be a archer in Salvus and he was
great at it. He was skilled with a bow but not to good with a sword. At
the age of 23 he became an adventurer and he is that now today. He
learned a lot about the Holy Oren Empire and the Kingdom of Renatus in
school. He stood about 5'5" from the ground with a rather skinny build.
He had some muscular build in his arms from arhcery training. He is
skilled at climbing and archery.


What are they like (personality)?: - kind trustworhty and hardy


What are their ambitions?: - to become a great ranger/warrior and to be able to work for his people as a soldier/guard


Do they have any special skills?: - arhceyr and parkour/climbing


What are their weaknesses?: - swords and sneak attacks


What do they look like?: - 5'5" with white armor


Anything else you want to say about them?: - no




Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -




Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on
our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[Tsuyose 3285]

I'm going to have to deny this application. 

 

First, I'd like to see a bigger and detailed biography, explaining about his life in Anthos and such, his parents if need be. Any jobs he's been in and more. Just basically involve more into the biography, make it interesting.

Second and third, I'd like for you to expand upon the role-playing defination please and if you could, add some creativity into this application, make it interesting for the reader. I know you're at a young age - the application was good. But just sort out these three things and I'm sure you'll get accepted.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions then send me a PM. Good luck with your next application!

[Tsuyose 3285]

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