[Denied]Application Connor2861

[connor2861 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - colinmacphie

How old are you?: - 18

What time-zone do you live in?: - uk

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes. I play dungeons and dragons with my friends

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - no but this one seems amazing.

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/95850-colinmacphie-aplication/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/95919-colinmacphie-aplication/

How did you hear about us?: -one of my friends told me

What do you think the server will be like? - it looks really good and fun

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - my favorite is that we have to stay in character

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - being given a role of a character to play as

What’s metagaming?: - any out of character action

What’s powergaming?: - doing something in the game which you cannot do in real life

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - yolerio

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - wood elf

What sex are they?: - male

How old are they?: - 21

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - he has no family or friends. All were killed in battle. He was once attacked by an undead and is now glad that there are no more of them. He has a girlfriend who he intends to marry but not as the battles are going on.

What are they like (personality)?: - funny, kind, happy and nice. Courageous

What are their ambitions?: - to fight for as long as possible and to meet other races

Do they have any special skills?: - other than with a bow, none really

What are their weaknesses?: - ambush or surprise

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - cloaked, leather armor, brown hair, brown eyes.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - he wants to travel away and explore

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -

[Nug 2011]

Sadly, I must deny this application for the following reasons:

 

~ Expand upon all three definitions as they are quite short and partially incorrect currently, you can use Google or Wikipedia but do not copy and paste your answers, write them in your own words.

 

~ Your current bio/story is very short and does not agree with lore when you say you were attacked by an Undead. The Undead are all gone now in Anthos, they all died/lost their power in Aegis when Iblees was sealed away. Please avoid the cliche of all your character's family/friends dying as it is also a bad way to try and get around having to write up a bio for your character.

 

~ Your current skin does not match up with the Wood Elf subrace or your character, please fix this.

 

~ Fix all grammatical errors throughout the application.

 

You may reapply 24 hours from this post, best of luck with your next application. 

[Nug 2011]

Moved to Denied Forum