[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Comet123's Application #1

[Comet123 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -npp

 

How old are you?: -13

 

What time-zone do you live in?: -GMT

 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - No

 

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No

 

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): -http://www.lordofthe...os/#entry734228 http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/96502-comet123s-application/#entry872098

 

How did you hear about us?: -A friend

 

What do you think the server will be like? -I think it will be fun because my friend is obsessed with it.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -yes

 

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -You need to keep in-character at all times.

 

Definitions: This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

 

What is roleplaying?: -When you take on a persona of a different person, usually in a video - game.

 

What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is when you use information that your char did not recieve to help that specific char, such as someone's name or weaknesses etc.

 

What’s powergaming?: - Doing something to another character before they can attempt to stop it, or do anything about it,

 

In-Character Information:

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: -Tathros Ironbeard
What race are they (and sub-race)?: -Cave Dwarf

 

What sex are they?: -Male

 

How old are they?: -180

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - When I was a child, I was the brother of Lathros, we were very much alike, he trained me in combat, and he helped me when our father did not return from the mines. After this my brother decided to train me in combat, as our father left he wouldn't be able to. My brother decided it was his responsibilty. So, we worked day and night fighting, as I couldn't beat him I came close. After the training was "over" I started farming, it was my new found passion, I fed the family and saved them minas. 

But, after a certain amount of time I left, to find a job where I could use my skills and make more minas. I never did find one that I liked. So, now I head back to Kal'Azgoth to re unite with my brother, and hopefully have a grand feast with him... We will eventually find our father!

 

What are they like (personality)?: -I am strict and greedy.

 

What are their ambitions?: -My ambitions are to obtain great riches with my brother, and find my father and show him that he does not need riches to be accepted by his kin.

 

Do they have any special skills?: -I'm good with agriculture, my brother trained me in the ways of combat when I was a kid, but I'm not the best at it.

 

What are their weaknesses?: - I will do whatever it takes to aid my brother if he ever needs it such as helping him in a life threating situation. I would rather help him than get riches for myself.

 

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: Red hair, muscular, blue eyes.

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: There is a very close relation ship between me and my brother, as we have not re - united yet, it will be a grand one.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://i.imgur.com/TgzHCgY.jpg

[ski_king3 0]

A nice app as a whole, you certainly fixed most of the issues brought forward in your previous application. However, there are a few things I'd like to see fixed before I can give a final verdict.

 

For one, your metagaming definition is a bit odd. I think you understand what it means, but do you think you could reword it to make it more clear? If you are having trouble, I'd refer to the wiki article found here. It's very helpful, just make sure not to plagiarize.

 

Also, please expand upon your biography, and make sure to include server lore when you do so.

 

Once these are completed, please send me a PM saying you've made the necessary changes, and I will review your app once more.

 

Verdict Below:

 

 

I would have liked to see a bit more server lore, but in all honesty, your application was fine enough to be accepted. Congratulations, glad to see you made it!

 

I would also recommend visiting the following links to make yourself a bit more knowledgeable about the server and roleplay in general:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=The_Ancient_History - The Ancient History

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83914-lotc-official-rp-vs-rpg-why-your-character-is-not-perfect/ - Why Your Character Is Not Perfect

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/77226-lotc-official-guide-to-not-getting-yourself-banned-within-your-first-month-of-playing/ - How to Not Get Banned

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/49355-the-lord-of-the-craft-staff-list/ - Our Staff

 

I look forward to seeing you on the server! I encourage you to send me a PM with any questions you have!

Please wait patiently for a GM to Whitelist you.

[ski_king3 0]

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