LordCommander

Honestly, I like some of the ideas of this lore, I think you should go into more mechanical detail on the Buff effect. The casting chart is pretty clear and the ball spell is pretty interesting as a magic projectile to counter other magic projectiles.

This seems like a perfect environment to use for events. +1

Basically, an Obsidian Steel Sword that falls apart when the owner dies?...another reason to be jealous of the Azdrazi. +1 Seriously, this is pretty rad.

First Commission Completed! Enjoy

Thanks for the kind words! This is certainly possible, please msg me on LordCommander or JordanXlord for any contact information you need, also I can easily do the red glint. Why thank you, I'm flattered you hold my skins in such regard, I can easily do this, just msg me on LordCommander or JordanXlord, or if you already have me on Skype (which I think you do) just send me the original skin.

Salutations Mortals! As you can tell by my lovely gift, I am asking for a challenge, now you wonder what kind of challenge I seek? well perhaps you read the title, I have recently been starting to get better at making skins, they are far from the best skins ever to be made, but I seek to improve myself and help people along the way. My only request is that you all be patient with me, and understand that I can be an extremely busy person at times (and a professional procrastinator sometimes). If you seek more information, updates or words of awe and praise, msg LordCommander or JordanXlord on the server and I'll hopefully answer. Application: Minecraft Username: Character Name: Character's Gender: Character's Race: Type of Skin made: (Skin types and prices will be listed below) Reference Pictures/Description: High-Quality Meme: Costs: Current Skin Modifications (Sudden Beards, Hair, Etc): 30m Custom Outfit (Outfits, Armor, Leather Gimp Suit): 85m New Creation from Scratch (will take awhile): 300-550m Examples: Commander Thond Doomforged (My Dark Dwarf) Volkhard Markward (My Haensetian Ascended) Brokki Emberwick (My Forest Dwarf Bard) Ag'Karak Uniform (My Old Clan Military Uniform)

As a GOD-fearing Bartender, having this power would help me protect my customers and promote RP. This shouldn't even be decided on, no need to vote, this is beyond Democracy, this is a god given right that we need. +10000000

Looks great! love the lower tiers of homunculi especially, would be cool to see an event involving those. +1

Alright, and their physical strength outside of bite? like could they pull down an armored knight from a horse with ease? do they have orcish strength, higher, lower?. Also Could you go into more detail on this? how would it hinder them? define a shorter time? and if their souls are not terribly corrupt, wouldn't that mean that Ascended magic isn't as effective against them as against Darker beings?

Then... -1 But seriously, always a fan of Lycanthropes, however on the previous servers I have been on, it has always been done poorly when left in the hands of players. Although I love the idea of Lycans, I am concerned with people just begging to be bitten and RPing as an overgrown dog. However the strengths and weaknesses are pretty good, could you go into more detail in how strong they are when compared to normal people? also on the weakness against Ascended magic, could you go into more detail on that? since their Soulfire affects undead differently (not VERY differently, but some take longer to burn in compared to others.) It is well written, however, good work!. +1

Honestly, if I wasn't a Ascended, I would totally be a Paladin...but damn this is Badass. Great work! +1

(I do have a question about this group, it doesn't seem to be very detailed in the actual culture, what is their society like outside of the military? I could be missing out on a previous post.)

As someone who has Severe Arachnophobia, I hate that you dare try to bring a humanoid version of those GODLESS EIGHT LEGGED ABOMINATIONS to this server, I hope they devour your young and burn with the rage of a thousand suns... But honestly this looks really cool and I like the idea! Good work! +1

Thank you for being rather polite and finding the flaws in my statement and taking a time to put it in a good format. I am rather new to all of these systems and just wanted to try to provide some Help. I am going to leave the rest of the defending of this to more veteran players who have more experience with the system.

I am a pretty new player, but I do have something to say about this point. The Soul Fire is meant to counter the Dark creatures that the Ascended are made to fight against. Light vs. Dark, so while Dark Magic seems to hurt and damage just about EVERYTHING. The Soul Fire only damages and affects Tainted Souls, doing jack diddly squat to the average man. Perhaps a more detailed scale of the power of Soulfire would be useful. Someone who has Tier 5 Soulfire being able to one hit kill most Dark Creatures except the more higher tier creatures, which it would deal a good amount of damage still, whereas a newly made Ascended with Tier 1 could probably greatly harm a lesser Dark Creature and dealing decent damage to the more mid-tear Dark Creatures. There is also the fact that the Ascended's Soul Fire has a rather short range, meaning that if you are the Great Dark Lord of Angst, just keep your distance and therefore don't have to worry about them.

As someone who is starting to get involved with the Ascended, I find the lore and RP aspect of them extremely interesting. There is a vast number of dark and neutral options given, so the good-aligned nature of the Ascended without being boy scouts in tights. The Ascended seem to be an Iconic and unique part of the Lord of the Craft setting, so they deserve to get the same amount of attention as other magics. Honestly, the main issue I have with this document is how daunting it is to read. I recommend keeping the lore and clarifications but have a more mechanical section to it with basic fluff, the Red Lines, the Pros, and Cons. I believe this would make it easier for Ascended players to just pull up a page for their magic, or for staff members to check their skills to make sure their actions are legit.

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