Sadly, my friend, there are a few mistakes with your application that prevent you from being accepted onto this server. However you are not denied, there is hope. You have 24 hours to fix the mistakes listed, afterward, SEND ME A PRIVATE MESSAGE ON THE FORUMS.
1)Backstory: I'm going to ignore all the spelling and grammar mistakes since English is not your first language. However something that made me raise my brow, was the fact she wanted to be a soldier, but she didn't enjoy fighting? And now she wants justice? It seems rather unbelievable.
2) Ambitions: This also goes into the first point, you want to be a Knight/Soldier and fight for your nation, then why do you dislike fighting? Those are militaristic professions and mostly revolve around an activity she dislikes.
3)Strengths and Weaknesses: Ignoring the fact that you are good at fighting, your weakness is strange. Just building? Could you please go into more detail onto possible flaws.
Despite the possible harsh tone in all of this, if you need any help with your application, please PM me, and I will try to assist you to the best of my ability. I do hope you fix your mistakes so I can change this pending to accepted.