Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
Your definitions need a little work, your power-emoting definition is an example, not a definition, and your roleplaying definition is a bit vague.
Your strength and weaknesses need to be defined and expanded on, say that your character is scared of water or that hes experienced in forging. Be sure to add a few more weaknesses and strengths as well.
Other than that, your bio is great and the rest of the app is well done. Please PM me when changes are made.