MC_BreadStick

Changed Status to Pending

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Pending

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! In addition, please elaborate on your metagaming definition, and make sure that you fully understand what each word means. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…? Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/ If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Changed Status to Under Review

This will be INSANE

Absolutely ENORMOUS uwu moment right there. Congrats team on being so GANGSTA

Lillian would walk by one of the missives, halting as she caught just a glance of some familiar key words. She’d furrow her brow as she read through before emitting a short scoff ”Oh Realleh-?” She would then turn the missive over and retrieve a quill, scribbling a message onto the back that reads: “You’re just jealous that you don’t have an inside source on the enemy” She would then smirk, and pin the missive back up with her message on the front instead.

I am high key and low key ready for this. PUMPED for the new map

MC Name (IGN): MC_Breadstick Personas (Character) Name: Lillian Grandaxe Discord: BreadStick#5363 Timezone: HST (Hawaii Standard Time) Persona’s Race: Dwarf Persona’s Age: 117 Any particular skills: Blacksmith (80+ years), Combat medic, Surgeon, Musician, Mercenary/Assassin (15+ years), Craftsman, Writer. Affiliations and Allegiances: Legion of Urguan, Sillumiran of Haelunor, technically part of Sutica government , Curantes Medical Guild

(( SMH YALL DIDNT EVEN TRY!! WWWWEAAAAKKKKK. I’m not going to consider these as irp objects as they are totally unrealistic and minimum effort was put into it. I can’t rp seeing a streak of paint literally floating through the air- with text that isn’t even painted nor printed onto the wall. As it is now these “New” paintings dont exist until they are PROPERLY MADE- HMPH I’m kidding about the rp part but I am genuinely salty about the effort smdh

[!] Some text has been painted onto this pillar. Someone seems to be getting into the electoral mood. The paint seems fresh for now.

[!] Someone has painted a message onto the stone here in red paint. It looks rather fresh, and was either done in a hurry, or by someone with little artistic talent.

Lillian Grandaxe steps back after finishing the painting- proud enough. And with a warm smug she scoops up her paint bucket and paintbrush to hurry off to the next location.

IGN: MC_Breadstick RP Name: Lillian Grandaxe Candidate: Jorvin Starbreaker

Lillian Grandaxe emits a short scoff ”F’course-... Sutica, back at et again”

Changed Status to Denied

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your character biography states that you killed multiple orcs within Oren. This can be considered powergaming. If this is your character’s background then make sure that it has legitimate lore references to back it up. Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc. Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. The roleplay scenario has the quotation marks and emotes flipped. Please make sure that what your character says is in quotation marks, and what they do is between * After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Denied

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not completing revisions within 24 hours, though here are the changes that would need to be made: Having a “Connection” with Yamekar is not a trait or personality, that is only a belief. Please change that. Also can you clarify that he thinks he has a connection to Yamekar please? Directly stating such isn’t really a legitimate thing. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Changed Status to Denied

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not making changes within the 24 hour mark, though here are the changes that would need to be made: Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Please make sure your personality is strictly personality. It also needs to have at least one negative personality trait. After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F