[Denied]Flashwoolfumble's 2Nd Application

[FlashWoolFumble 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  FlashWoolFumble
How old are you?: -  12
What time-zone do you live in?: -  EST USA
 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  No
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  No
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/105336-flashwoolfumbles-application/

How did you hear about us?: - A friend
What do you think the server will be like? -  Cool LOTR things and awesome RP
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  No avoiding RP


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  Using preset information to act like a different person and obeying the server's no metagaming and powergaming rules

What’s metagaming?: -  Using OOC information in your roleplay 

What’s powergaming?: -  Giving your character special abilities without doing the work to gain that knowledge

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Chargon Kryaos

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Wood Elf

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: -  135

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -  Chargon grew up in Malinor. When he was about 35 his tree caught fire with all his family in it. Flo'rean his younger brother quickly escaped to get help. By the time he had returned the tree was destroyed. Chargon urged his parents to go with him through the tunnels. As Chargon walked through. The tunnel closed before his parents could follow. Chargon is now a wanderer who tries to help any race or person in need. He is now in search of his brother Flo'rean as they never saw each other again. In his lifetime doing different jobs he trained himself to be a good sword wielder and archer. Chargon is very noble and he will not be shown a fool. If he thinks he can not win a battle he will not fight it. Chargon's life story is a tragic one but who knows it cold turn out well.

What are they like (personality)?: -  Bold, funny, intelligent, and noble, and strong

What are their ambitions?: -  To gain the love and trust of all people

Do they have any special skills?: -  Swordsmanship and archery

What are their weaknesses?: -  Fire (Fear of it)

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  Chargon Kryaos has green eyes and blond hair. He wears leaf green traveling cloths and wears a quiver on his back.
Anything else you want to say about them?: -  His eyes reflect his surrounding and he is very popular among all races



Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

 

 

-You definitions are much too short, and are very vague - try and expand upon them.

-Your biography is too short.

-Your biography includes no lore except a passing mention about the NATION of Malinor - yet no specific places, or even what land he was in.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions. 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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