[Denied][Pending] Xbr4Dzz Application

[xBradzz 0]

What's your minecraft name?- xBr4dzz

How old are you?- 15

What time-zone do you live in?- GMT

Have you ever roleplayed before- If you have, how? On another server.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?- Yes, I have.

Have you applied to this server before?- No

How did you hear about us?- A friend. 

What do you think the server will be like?- I think it will be very enjoyable. 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?- Yes

What's your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?- Racism is allowed IC, but make sure you don't do it OOC. 

 

What is roleplaying?-  Roleplaying is when you make character's personality, trait, and actions to act out a certain scenario. 

What is metagaming?- Metagaming is when you out of character information in character. for instance if I said "How is you're dead relative?" IC even though you don't know there character's relative is dead.

What is powergaming?- Powergaming is not giving the other player a chance to react. An example would be A: *Punches B* Instead, it should of gone like this. A*Goes to punch B* And that would give B a chance to react.

 

What is your character called?- Jim Rick

What race are they?- Human

What sex are they?- Male

How old are they?- 22

Give us a brief description of their life- their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing):- Jim was born in Kralta. Both of his parents got lost at sea. The village worked together to raise Jim, but he never listened to anyone. Jim would steal bread from the local bakery and became agile as he would run away from the guards. By the time Jim was 14, he ran away from Kralta. He met a girl named Katie and they became best friends. After 3 years of surviving, they ran into some bandits. Jim was captured but Katie ran for it. Jim got away and has been searching for Katie ever since. 

 

What are they like (personality)?- Nice, caring, and smart. He can be tricky at times. 

What are their ambition?- To have a family. 

Do they have any special skills?- Playing guitar

What are their weaknesses?- Seeing people hurt, or sad. 

 

Give a descripition of how they look:- He has deep red eyes with dark red hair, and he is tanned skinned. 

 

Anything else you want the say about them?- He is very clumsy and foolish. 

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character's skin:- http://minecraft.novaskin.me/skin/11530371/Mediveal

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied because you did not make the following changes in the 24 pending hours provided:

 

- Your biography is a nice start, but could use a bit more detail in certain places, such as your characters parents getting lost at sea (wondering why he wasn't with them) and the encounter with the bandits (how did he escape, and what happened in between?). Just add some detail to some of the events to make your biography more interesting.

 

- Your biography doesn't quite contain enough server lore. Please add mention of at least 1 more location from Anthos and at least 1 of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

 

- Expand on your weaknesses a little and explain how they could put your character at a possible disadvantage.

 

Your application is very good, just needs a bit of tweaking. It's also worth mentioning that red eyes don't really suit Humans and might lead to you being ridiculed, so I'd recommend changing them (though, not entirely necessary). You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

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