[Denied][Pending] Application For Shamrockz5000

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  Shamrockz5000

How old are you?: - 17

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - Yes On CubeRealm

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): -  No

 

How did you hear about us?: - A friend

What do you think the server will be like? -  An Awesome RPG experience filled with adventures, Maybe LOTR styled?

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - The rule stating the Metagaming is not allowed

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- No

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: - Playing in an open world sandbox, through the eyes of a fictional character.

 

What’s metagaming?: - A character using outside information he/she should not know about.

 

What’s powergaming?: - The form of gaming to where you will do anything to have the fastest progression through a game

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Althalos

 

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - Orc

 

What gender are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 22

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): -  Hailing from the nation of  Krugmar, the town of Sanjezal, Althalos was a young adult. He was abandon by his father and his mother died during childbirth. He had no parents to care for him. He lived on the streets as nothing but a beggar. He was however feared by even the bravest of men in the city. For at his young age he had a distinct feature of his tusks, which he had 3, which was more than the average male at that age. He was also blessed to have the blood red eyes that an Orc so rarely had. He sat in his tent one day, whisking away at the thought of slaughtering some blasted Necromancers. He then heard an explosion and ran outside to see Or'jak. "How dare he attack the mighty Rax Clan?" Using his long sword, Althalos effortlessly beheaded the enemy. As he was headed toward Or'jak a mighty fire erupted from the shamans standing near him and they all burst into flames. Tythor slowly strolled over toward Or'jak as Or'jak shambled his way out of the fire and Or'jak was beheaded. Seeing such a powerful person get slayed but Tythor was just.. was just remarkable. It made Althalos realize that he too was weak like Or'jak and that he too could be defeated in combat by anyone who confronted him.  This lessened his Narcissism only slightly. He was still the super self conceded Orc we know today.  This battle proved to the great Orc Generals that Althalos may have the potential to become one of the most powerful Orcish Generals in all of the land.

What are they like? (personality): - Egotistical, Strong, Narcissistic 

 

What are their ambitions?: - To become a General in the military! To get off the streets and make a name for himself!

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - Very handy with  any type of melee weapon, Can repair pretty much any weapon or piece or armour. Very egotistical so he doesn't care much for others

 

Give us a description of how they look?: -  Tall, Well-built, Shaggy

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://imgur.com/LOyOqZN

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Your application is denied.

 

Here is why:

• After giving you the chance to fix it, your powergaming definition is still incorrect.
• You didn't really add more lore to your biography.
• I'm really confused about what happened in your biography. You beheaded Or'jak, and then he burst into flames only to be beheaded again?
• There is a bit of powergaming in your bio where you say that you beheaded Or'jak effortlessly. Beheading someone is not easy, let alone an orc. And why wouldn't he have fought back?

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions you may have.

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