Halfling Roleplay Ep. 6!

[hobbinrood 74]

Hi All!

 

Here's the next episode of our series. Remember to like, comment, and subscribe to my channel! It really helps me out.

 

 

What should I do differently?

 

[Tethras 278]

I'm not an expert or trying to be rude here, just a few things I noticed that may make it more interesting. Though this may be just me:

• Look at the content you're displaying, now think. Is it really interesting? Does it keep the viewer watching and yearning for more? This might devalue my opinion a tad but I found myself skipping through parts since I just lost interest. Roleplay isn't that bad to display but I didn't really feel draw into it or really engaging with what was happening in any sort of way. 
• Commentary - I kinda felt the viewers was a second thought, although it improved throughout the video.
• Intro - I felt like I was thrown into the deep end, wasn't sure what was happening originally. A short intro maybe? Like "Hi I'm blah blah, we're currently doing X. Oh wow looks like Y is happening here! Let's go check it out", ect...

These are just some things I noticed, but who knows I may be wrong? At the end of the day I don't make videos. Was  fun to watch for the bits I didn't skip, keep at it! 

[hobbinrood 74]

I appreciate the feedback! I'll work on it. Thank you!

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Server has a maximum view distance I believe.

[Gunner 775]

Moved to the Archive. It shall be sorted into the appropriate category shortly.