[Denied]James Fenris Steele Application Mark Ii

[TerraFrost 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - epicboy2077

How old are you?: - 14

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - No, But my knowledge of roleplaying is extensive. As i have role played on games such as Lord of The Rings Online.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - No.

 

How did you hear about us?: - Planet MineCraft.

What do you think the server will be like? - Well from what i have read. Its seem like you know what you’re doing in terms of lore and mechanic’s. Gameplay seems fun and from what i can tell the members seem solid.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - I agree with the most on all player’s have to agree which style they fight with. As it will stop the initial troll from picking magic and sword’s then quickly switching over to bow.

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:-Yes i do and if i have any further questions will contact someone that might be able to help. And i have an understanding as to what to do and what not to do as a villain.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):-No thank you. But i do have a question not regarding rules (Don’t know where to post this.) I have a question regarding plugin’s and other such thing’s. Where and who would i talk to?

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: - What my statement on what roleplaying is? Well roleplaying to me is where you can be whoever you want to be. Want to be a crook who steals from the rich and gives to the poor? You can! But i see it as a chance to enter a new world. Be apart of something new and exciting. Lore makes it more immersive as you’re really there. A group of bandit’s are invading a city. As guard of the city it is your sworn duty to protect it with all of your life. I love that feeling that even though it is in a game its something real and immersive. I love roleplaying and i always will.

 

What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is when you know something your realistically character would not. As an example “A friend sends you the location of his secret base. Do not just walk there, Have someone take you or make a journey out of it”

 

What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming is the where you do an act to someone and not let them act upon it in any way. Example: “Raider attacks Guard, Guard block’s attack, Raider use strength to break guards defenses, Raider attacks again, Guard parry’s attack, Raider takes out a dagger and kills guard”. See the “Raider” did not even give the guard a chance he simply had his/her own way and killed said guard.

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: -  James Fenris Steele, Brother of Garret William Steele

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - Human (-Subrace -HighLander)  

What gender are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 23

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, etc. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - We grew up around Petrus -Home of the Humans. Life was always quite tough for our family, Including us. We come from a relatively poor family. Life was almost always hard for us but we made do. Our mother was almost always quite depressed the only thing keeping her going was our dad. Me and my brother Garret always looked out for each other, Through hard times and bad times. We learned Fletching and BlackSmithing as a trade. Our father before he was killed taught us in the ways of combat. Even with our poorness i always did have something of charisma which was helpful in bargains. I also trained to become a blacksmith as that is what I wanted to be. In doing so i became quite strong. School was not one of my favorite things but i knew it was one of the only chances i would get to learn so i payed attention and did my best. My brother on the other hand wanted to become a guard. Which i supported him. But after our dad was killed and our mother became deceitful our family name “Steele” in a mess. We promised our mother that we would one day come back with wealth and power to make her proud. So we gathered our things and headed out into the great beyond in search of our chance for success.

 

 

What are they like? (personality): - Charismatic,Careful,Helpful,Skillful,intelligent(To an extent)  Likes to make jokes to lighten up bad situation’s. Mostly thinks of others when in situation’s, Is willing to lay down his life for his brother Garret William Steele.

 

What are their ambitions?: - Him and his brother Garret are looking for a big break (Rich and to Redeem our family’s name.) as James and Garret come from a relatively poor family. Our dad was killed from an assassin and left our mom heart broken. She took in to deceitful ways (Stealing and such) and left the name Steele in a bad shape. We promised our mom that we would come back wealthy and powerful to redeem our name. So James and Garret set out as traveler’s with only our horses to ride and our clothes on our back and sword and bow at their side for their “Big Break”.

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - Our dad was an archer before he was slain. He used to bring us out to the field’s and train us in sword’s and bow’s as well as magic (That he dabbled in). That lead to us becoming quite good in combat (I.e Magic,Sword fighting,Bow’s) And as a hobby we practiced Fletching and Blacksmithing. But our family was cured. As our mother got deeper into deceit and stealing she stole from a witch. A gem of life which was to bring a dead friend back to life. She cursed her and us with Rytheus a curse that was orginally made by warlocks of the undead’ it was told that if you die your soul would belong to the witch...Forever.(RP dying of course not minecraft) “The only way to reverse the curse is to redeem your mother’s name”. And then she disappeared...Not telling us how just that we had to redeem our mother’s name.

 

Give us a description of how they look?: - About 6 feet, Dark brown hair. Blue Eyes, Small Beard. Fair skin.  

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/medieval-traveler-1546033/

 

 

Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied

-Your biography is incoherent, and hard to understand.

-There is no gem or crystal, or curse made by warlocks, nor undead that'd give one's soul to a witch.

-Try and explain everything -IN THE BIOGRAPHY. The ambitions and skills sections are for one to list their character's ambitions and skills, the reasoning behind their ambitions and skills should already be explained in the biography.

-It says in your biography your character knows magic. But what kind? How much?

Likewise, if you plan on learning/knowing magic on the server- I suggest you take a look at the "Magic Guides" forum section.

-It says in your biography that the father of your character was killed by an assassin. Yet why would an assassin randomly kill a poor peasant man...?

-You failed to list any weaknesses for your character.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.