[Title Is A Work In Progress]

[LPT 771]

Hi everyone, I have wanted to write  recently, and came up with an idea for a medieval style book in a different world with no protagonist and no antagonist, just a grey area where people merely have their own oppiuion on who they like and dislike. I wrote the prologue today and I just need a bit of help with feedback and a title. I could also use an editor as my punctuation and grammar are not overly great to put it nicely. Be sure to check back at a later date and I'll have more.

 

It’s the year 1243 in the realm of Turthas currently the two large powers are separated by  a difference in religion, currently the  monarchs of  both nations are at war with each other, it is historically known as the ‘Great Crusade’  by both the Kingdom of  Covia and the kingdom of Asadus but for different reasons. The Covians believe that the creator of the world allows free will, where the Asadians believe that he has a plan for everyone and  makes sure that plan is kept the same. The entire separation of state started as a small argument between  two Archbishops which then spread their ideals to as many people as they could. This quickly got to the Pontiff of the Kothan religion (The religion they followed)  and he sided with the people now known as the Covians, soon after the Pontiff  declared  any people who believed that the god forced people to live a certain way are heretics. This quickly caused an anger of the people and caused a massive divide of the church. When Emperor John the third sided with  the Pontiff half of the realm sprung into rebellion forming the Kingdom of Asadus. Now the war rages for both a united Empire and a United church.

[LPT 771]

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[Porko 397]

I've found that the actual story doesn't have to be good as long as the writing and characters are engaging and interesting. They could be waging a war on pickles, but as long as it's written well and it has neat characters, it could be good. You could just say the two powers are at war, and then have the clashing religions be brought up with dialogue.

[monalisa 7]

I'd be willing to help edit punctuation for you.

[LPT 771]

I've found that the actual story doesn't have to be good as long as the writing and characters are engaging and interesting. They could be waging a war on pickles, but as long as it's written well and it has neat characters, it could be good. You could just say the two powers are at war, and then have the clashing religions be brought up with dialogue.

Duly noted. I'll  consider that for my prologue

 

 

I'd be willing to help edit punctuation for you.

That would be lovely.

[Knox213 10]

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