[Accepted] [Pending] Starnian's Application

[Starnian 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? : Starnian

How old are you? : 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13? : Yes

Have you applied to this server before? : No

Have you read and agreed to the rules? : Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most? : I always play survival in ways that don’t defy the law of physics. It just feels and looks better to me.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? : I don’t quite understand what soul stones are, and how they are used. It mentioned them in RP rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I have been trying to find a RP server for a long time, this one looked quite well done and got my attention, back to the question, I just was searching Google.

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying? : This is usually when a community is created and people pick a character that has their own story and thoughts. RP choices aren’t usually your choices, but choices that the character you play as is supposed to make.

What is metagaming? : This is when a character is OOC and uses knowledge from the player, not the character. An example is when a person you like/dislike IRL, is treated the same why in the game because of their relationship with you. This doesn’t mean have to be rude to friends, just follow your RP.

What is powergaming? : This is forcing people to RP a certain way, or giving you characters the best and most desirable states, while minimizing the less desirable ones. If you’re powergaming, you may be RPing that what you do is successful and the opposition failed, without them even responding.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Khole Alixundor Shnar

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Adunian

Character’s age: 19

Biography: ​I lived with my parents, Grenn and Rona and my two brothers, Julan and Crast in the brush of Godfrey's peaks. Before we moved here resided in Thales. Thales was a great land but a harsh winter arrives and we were forced to leave or die. Once we arrived in Athera we headed for the mountains. Godfrey's peaks are north of petrus, but we never go there, not any reason. The peaks were large and very rocky, it was tough, but also somewhat enjoyable living there. All I really needed to be happy was my family, and my hunting gear. One night after a great a hunt, we were eating venison in our small cabin. We heard shouts and which drew us close to window, what we was a group of all sorts of races. About half a dozen humans and three ogres. We knew instantly it was a raiding party of bandits. My father and I backed away from the windows and shouted back at our family to get ready to run. I knew if these monsters caught us, we would have no chance of survival. As the door was smashed down, two humans run in, blades high. My family fought off the first two, killing them both. Then the ogres tore down our walls, The sudden destruction stunned me for a just long enough for orc to bring up his sword and slash from my forehead to my cheek, right across my eye. It was permanently injured and changed not only my appearance, but also my life. In the chaos something metal hit me in the back of my head. The last thing I saw before was my father cut through the ogre's chest with his sword, staining the floor and walls with blood. Then the world of darkness swirled around me, taking me in.

                         I awoke looking at what was my home, now a only a insignificant pile of ash and rubble. My family was nowhere to be seen, and the same for anything else. A feeling I have never felt before started to rumble inside of me, a rage and blood thirst. I never felt something so consuming  and scary before. These feeling have slightly subsided since the attack, but I know It will never leave me. Every day has been a struggle, the only thought moving me forward right now, is to find whom I loved. Now I am walking, probably to Petrus, the closest settlement near us. Once I am ready and am armed, I will be on the lookout for my people and those damn criminal bastards.

Personality Traits: Intelligent, not only in the ways of the woods, but also in strategy, which I use in my long hunts. I am loyal  to my family name and the people I trust and care for. I think I am a lost soul now that I am completely alone, with no friends, family or home, completely alone.

Ambitions: To find as much as he can about his family. My only other goal is to survive. A bit of me feels like it’s missing; maybe I’m just so lonely.

Strengths/Talents: I am now used to adapting and surviving to new environments, once I set my mind and am dedicated, nothing can stop me.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: I tend to have trust problems and am not used to company from being alone so much. Sometimes is taken over by determination.

Appearance: Six feet and 7 inches, brown hair, never let to grow to long, a slashed eye, usually never seen laughing, or even seen for that matter.

 

 

 

 

P.S. This is my first application; hopefully it has followed your desired format.

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[Overland 349]

  Your application has been put on pending, please make the changes requested below within 24 hours to be accepted. Send me a private message once you have completed these changes.

• Your biography lacks server lore, and having your parents killed by Orcs is a bit clique. If you wish to keep that element of the story, then it's best you use something other than Orcs.
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• Expand on your personality slightly.
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I shall send you a private message to address your confusion with the rules regarding soulstones. Feel free to contact me via private message if you have any questions or concerns regarding your application or the server.

 

 

 

Certainly a better application.

[Overland 349]

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