[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Knights5544's Application / Fixed

[Knights5544 485]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Knights5544
How old are you?: Sixteen y/o
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Definitely no swearing, I believe in maturity! 
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Google!
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is taking up a role and pretending to be that role.
What is metagaming?: The use of other information that could be used to cheat/affect your gameplay.
What is power gaming?: An example of power-gaming is being ... Say someone with a knife. Let's say you attempt to stab another person with your knife. Power gaming in that instance would be not letting him/her be able to counter/fight back.
In-Character Information 
 
Character’s name: Wolfe av Huwaard
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Human
Character’s age: 18
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
 
*Edited after seeing the rule about no villainous acts

*I hope it's okay with you guys if I add a third paragraph
Being a highlander in Hanseti, Wolfe left his home at the tender age of fourteen after being abandoned by his parents. Being on the run left Wolfe physically weak due to not being able to eat proper food and get proper rest. Wolfe spent most years of his young life begging on the street. It wasn't until he was sixteen when he was forced into a "foster home". When Wolfe reached seventeen, he and a few fellow "inmates" snuck out, never to return. Ever since then, Wolfe has been regarded as scum.
 

It's not surprising that Wolfe is regarded as scum from everywhere he goes ... The family av Huwaard in Hanseti, and pretty much else-where, is infamous for it's treacherous deeds, even though they never broke a law, they were regarded as fugitives and trouble-makers. The family av Huwaard was well-known for their gambling addiction which lead them to lose their farm, and when they couldn't afford the heavy-tariffs of their land, their land-owner evicted them. The family av Huwaard did not want to have to put Wolfe through misery so they abandoned him, never to be seen again. Wolfe will never forget the anger he felt at them for their deeds.

 

When he turned eighteen, Wolfe found himself in Petrus ... He enlisted in the Guard where he was dishonorably discharged for negative behavior. After that, Wolfe vowed to get his revenge on them and decided to turn a new leaf and forget his past. After that period of time, Wolfe wasn't heard of up until recently when it was rumored he was trying to become a monk at the Cloud Temple Sanctuary, though it's not quite sure if he was actually accepted. Wolfe was credited with writing a few books at the time of his youth, but publications of those books have been long-ago lost. In-fact, there's a current rumor going around that Wolfe has moved back into Hanseti to find blood relatives of his.

 

 
Personality Traits: Genius, kind, brave, cynical, gregarious, confident-leader, hunter, cunning.
Ambitions: To gain a piece of land and raise a family.
Strengths/Talents: He is a farmer, he's a cunning, confident leader, though he was never given the chance to lead ... "His wit was four-folds as greater than his leadership" ... He is also very talented with a bow.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is immensely skinny which affects his strength, he is also awful at fighting with a sword, he is awful at speech/persuasion. While Wolfe is a farmer, he certainly does not have a magic thumb, Wolfe is cursed with immense bad-luck. On top of the other weaknesses, Wolfe is not a man of, how I say, 'walking on a tight-rope' ... Wolfe is terrible at stealth.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is a tall, skinny human hovering at about 6'2, 129 pounds... He has brown hair and blue eyes. Wolfe is a Highlander.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://gyazo.com/ea7bb2ee76f61854eadd6345c01e7a1e

[Overland 349]

Pending

Your application has been put on pending, please make the needed changes within 24 hours to be 

• Your power-gaming definition is incorrect. 
• Mireton and Salvus existed long before your character's birth. More recent locatios can be found on these wiki pages: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera and http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Thales
• The first part of your biography is a little confusing, who do refer to do in a brutal murder by thieves?
• Please balance your strengths and weaknesses. Saying your character is surprisingly attractive doesn't make sense.

Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns regarding your application or the server.

Accepted

Hanseti didn't really exist during the time your character was born, but otherwise please wait for a Global Moderator to whitelist you.

[Overland 349]

Moved to Accepted Forum

[Wretched 2075]

Player Whitelisted