[Denied]White-List Apply 2

[Jirka_H 0]

My second attempt to apply.

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Jirka_H

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Because, I like LOTR

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Is it a Game style. In this style you play for some character

What is metagaming?: Is it a strategy used in game.

What is powergaming?: sorry, I don´t know

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Titanius Ocelkuj

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Kharajyr

Character’s age:36

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):I'm 36 years old. I measure 1.8 meters. I work as a blacksmith in a small village in this village almost never do not go out until now. I love my job but sometimes boring. I want to become a knight and so I am ready to face any danger. I can very well use the sword. I like fishing and hunting game. I can only their mother tongue.

Our village is located on the south and lives in it only a few people. It is surrounded by woods and one lake. I live here because they like the house that I built exactly suits me but I want to start a new life on the road for adventure!

Ambitions: Be a knight

Strengths/Talents:I can very well use a sword.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Inexperience in the outside world.

 

And I sorry for my English, I am a Czech. Thanks.

Jirka_H

 

[Tirenas 677]

Upon re-applying, please correct the following:

• You said you have not applied in the past, yet this is your second application. Please link your application upon re-applying.
• Your biography is incredibly lacking. It has zero server lore and is not long enough.
• Your character's ambitions are incredibly minimal.
• Your character's strengths and weaknesses need to be elaborated upon.
• All three of your definitions are incorrect.

[Tirenas 677]

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