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[Drumman123 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: drumman123

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): I do recall applying but it was around 2011 so it is not really important.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I hate combat loggers and no combat avoidance without RP is my favourite rule

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understand all rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Minecraft forums.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Leaving your real life persona behind and stepping into a created characters mind, thinking and acting as if you were living your characters life.

What is metagaming?: Using knowledge in RP which your character has no way of knowing

What is powergaming?: using RP to empower your character over all others for example in text based combat stating that your character instantly killed all characters with his mind would be an extreme case of Power gaming. Another example of powergaming would be dodging every attack in text based combat or stating that your character fled battle riding a dragon

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Doavik Longthorn

Character’s gender:Male 

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 36

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Born in the mountains Doavik was taught to fight from an early age. When he was 16 he was climbing a mountain in search of coal when his pickaxe slipped and he fell over 50 meters into a nearby river knocking him unconscious, when he awoke he saw a strange face staring down at him and strange surroundings "where am I?" he asked, the human tending to his wounds replied with a smirk; "Not anywhere you want to be" Doavik saw this as a threat and immediately took action, rising from his bed and overpowering the mysterious man and asking again; "Where am I?" the human, now clearly suffering still resisted interrogation and replied; " You will have to snap my neck before I tell you where you are inbred Dwarven swine!" Doavik responded by doing just that. Doavik quickly opened the door of the hut he was in only to see a circle of around 4 masked men waiting for him each possessing a tool which he assumed was going to be used to torture him. Doavik had always been a nomad travelling the mountains in solitude with a few close family members and he had never actually met a human before but he could already tell he would not like them. Soon the 4 masked men started to close in on Doavik, but he still had a small knife with him he had used to cut ropes while climbing he realized it would be needed to defend himself but he had never actually killed a living creature such as a human, soon the men struck, they started moving around him in a circle with one of them attacking then retreating to the circle, as if they were partaking in some sort of ritual, while intimidating this method of attacking was very inefficient as instead of using their numbers to overpower Doavik they engaged in individual  1 on 1 battles. Doavik reacted quickly and as each man attacked him he defended and counter attacked. Doavik defeated all 4 of the mysterious men with no wounds except a large scar on his arm that remains a reminder of what the humans did to him.

 

 After escaping the sadistic cult he has had a mistrust of humans so strong that he refuses to speak with most humans he encounters. Doavik travelled Athera in search of information on why he was attacked and who those sinister men that he met years ago really were. 20 years after his attack he has finally overcome the memory of what happened to him and now seeks to find a purpose in life. His travels have brought him to decide that he wishes to become a member of the army of Urguan and to protect Dwarves from enduring the trauma that he once experienced, he is determined to reach Kal'Agnar and serve the Third Grand Kingdom of Urguan. Doavik has the utmost respect for the Frostbeard clan, he models many aspects of his life around them and his biggest aspiration is to one day be a part of the Frostbeard clan. Doavik is a strong follower of the Brathmordakin and follows the teachings of Wyvurn over other Brathmordakin gods.

Personality Traits: Motivated, proud, easily distracted 

Ambitions: Join the Army and serve the Kingdom of Urguan

Strengths/Talents: a very capable fighter and also a talented blacksmith. He is very resistant to the cold as he has lived most of his life travelling at high altitudes.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: he is a rather unintelligent being and he has a difficult time getting along with humans due to his youth. He lacks the ability to shoot a bow and arrow. He finds it difficult to make any lasting friendships however he knows he can trust his few true friends. One arm is weaker than the other due to his injury from many years ago.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): very tall for a dwarf measuring 5'3. He weighs around 95kg. He has black hair and striking blue eyes the colour of diamonds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/aRaG7FU

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

Please wait patiently for a Game moderator to implement your account.

 

 

Please fix the following problems within 24 hours on the application: 

• Your power-gaming definition while correct needs expansion.
• The biography is a bit power-gamed in the fact of defeating the 6, while possible it is very unlikely and I would recommend changing it up to seem more likely.
• Your backstory needs to contain more server lore, it can be found here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Expand upon your characters weaknesses and strengths.

 

Note: The current Dwarven capital is Ka'Karaad, it was renamed from Kal'Agnar after a siege from the Undead. Your biography also still is a bit pgy, but I feel as though after talking to you in pms, you understand the definition and that your biography is better after you nerfed it. Remember that you are very UNLIKELY and will mostly never win against that many opponents even in 1v1s without more than just a large scar. 

 

If you have any questions or  concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

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