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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:cougarknight18

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/123530-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no pedophilia

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?-youtube video

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Where you play as a character.

What is metagaming?:Where you know things that your character does not know. Like how a reader in a book knows more than the character in the book.

What is powergaming?:Where a something is overpowered even thought there isn't much explanation. Like he is overpowered because he is overpowered.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:Joseph Griffin

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:Adunian

Character’s age:16

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Joseph Griffin grew up in the backhills of Oren in a border. The village that he grew up in was named Luth. His father was a roaming knight by the name Drake. He was a human and yet he marred a young Adunian named Kar. They bore two children 10 years apart. Nik the older and Joseph the younger. PAtrick grew to know a young boy who lived near the abandonded temple up the road named Mathias. He had a racist father and was forced to live in the fringes of the village because of his racist habits. By the age of 16 Joseph had learned some fighting skills from his father and knew the abilities of a common day labourer. He knew little of the world's past since his mother was not learned and his father refused to teach him much besides the common lore. This changed one day when human soilders came into the village demanding taxes for the king. The town cheif told them they had already. The soilder than cut off his head and kicked his body away. The gorup of 30 or so soilder started to attack the whole village cutting everyone down who did not try to fight back. The soilders then ended up going to Joseph's house. Joseph who had not been in the village saw it buring down. When he rushed to his home he saw his brother stabbed with a spear to the pole outside their house the soilder who had done it looting their valuables. Joseph grabbed their father's greatblade and cut the soilder across his back. He returned to his brother who was grasping to life. He told him to leave and never look back here. Sinc ehe looked more man than elf to become one and forget his real person. Joseph left his brother when he finally stopped talking. Grasping his father's blade he walked to the temple. As he entered the temple there was indent in the floor and when he stepped on it and the floor colasped. As he got up he saw light and walked to it. There stood his friend Mathias in a cloak and an alter infront of him. In the corner was the corpses of his mother and father. He explained that he sacrificed them for the ability to do what he had done. Joseph saw that on the alter were statues and a recreation of the village. He explained that he had used his powers of shade and necromancy to kill the soilders and then control their corpses. Over his shoulder was a great sword as long as Joseph's. He slung it over his shoulder. He explained that he wanted to be with Joseph forever. Joseph agreed to that and said he was going to do the same but he hadn't because he might hurt Mathias. Mathias dropped the sword and ran over to Joseph. Joseph cuts down Mathias as he runs over and kills him. A shadowy figure appears behind Joseph and as he looks behind he says that a soul is only worth so much. The figure then dissapears and Joseph looks at the scene. He decides that Mathias made a contract with some being and used his parents as the be one to make the contract. Joseph burned Mathias's parents bodies. He then picked up Mathias's body and left the crypt. When he returned to the village there were bodies everywhere and the last soilder is lying there wounded. He sits there and Joseph asks him what happened. He says that Mathias had killed them in their sleep and resurected them. He then said that a warrior in blue had taken out the last five of them that had been sent out them out. He said that he left the village. Joseph put his sword through the man's head as he finished his sentence. Joseph went to the center of town and made a mass grave for everyone in the village. He also put the soilders in. He then returned to his home and found a note. It was from his father saying that he should change the world and destroy evil. With that Joseph goes into his house and finds his father's blue armor and some money and food. Joseph than leaves deciding that he can't get into a position of political power so he will travel and form a band of sellswords  to destroy evil around the world.

Personality Traits:Doesn't easily trust people, light hearted, strong, stubourn

Ambitions:To create a group of mercenarys to gain status and to kill evil, also find his father

Strengths/Talents:physically strong, some weapon training, labour skills, can ride a horse

Weaknesses/Inabilities:bad eye sight, kinda dumb, easily tricked, doesn't always know who he is talking to, easily angered, and is haunted by killing his friend.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):6'1" with eyes as white as the moon and hair as dark as the night sky. His armour his is blue as lapis. 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://animenerdtv.imgur.com/all/

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Your application is
 
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You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.
 
Your application has been denied for the following reasons:
  • Your roleplaying definition needs to be expanded upon.
  • Your power-gaming definition is incorrect. 
  • Your character must be at application process must be at least 18-20.
  • The magic of mathias in your biography does not abide lore.
  • Please use an existing town in oren which can be found on the wiki. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
 
If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!
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