LazyBird 0 Share Posted March 20, 2015 Out-Of-Character Information Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Lazy_Bird How old are you?: 13 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?: A five second countdown before interacting in default combat. It gives the player time to get ready and not reading while getting hurt. Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I wanted to have a good rp server to play on minecraft. So the lazy person I am I went to Youtube. I watched a few videos about Lord of the Craft and I was interested. Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when a player makes his own character and backstory. The player must act like their character. The player has the freedom of making their own story with players. It must be like you are in the setting or in the situation. So no "YO WHAT UP" in Lord of the Craft. You must not use non rp mechanics such as coordinates. What is metagaming?: Metagaming is in many different forms. If a player says your name without asking breaks the immersion and is metagaming. Another form of metagaming is when a player give coordinates to another player instead of doing rp and directing them. Also when a player has a helmet on you do not recognize them. What is powergaming?: Powergaminng is where one player( In a text combat situation) takes over the combat without the other player's interaction. Example: I swing my sword at his head and it comes clean off. The other player had what so ever interaction. In-Character Information Character’s name: Dilmore Dalg'alk Character’s gender: Male Character’s race: Human Character’s age: 23 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Dilmore is apart of a line of well know hunters. He even has a bit of wood elve in his blood. His family never lived in one spot. They explored Athera to see the wonders it had to offer. His dad and his older brother, Glimere, hunted while he,his mom, and his little sister ,Eldra, stayed and set up camp for the night. They never stop exploring. Sadly when Dilmore was 13 his family woke up in the night hearing some kind of mumble. Before they could realize it a group of orcs came out and ambushed them. Dilmore's mom,dad, and sister all got slaughtered. Gilmere grabbed Dilmore's arm and ran into the forest. They managed to escape. Gilmere was 19 at that time to he took care of his brother while they continued what they did before, explore. Gilmere got deadly ill at the age of 20 and soon after died. Dilmore could not go on and made his way to the nearest village. He walked day and night with little rest. Within a mile of the village his body gave out and he dropped unconscious. He was rescued by a 30 year old man named Ligdorg. When Dilmore tell Ligdorg what had happened Ligdorg asked if he could take care of him. Ligdorg taught him the ways of the bow and arrow and the sword for the 5 years. One day Dilmore went out to the forest for a walk only to be greeted with harm. A insane bandit came with a flint and steel and set Dilmores hair on fire. Dilmore managed to kill the bandit with his sword to the bandit's chest. The fire was still going and made a fireball out of the upper part of Dilmores head. He managed to set it out with a jump in a river but came back with the upper part of his head black and gray. The fire even spread to one of his eyeballs making it blind. Barely getting back to Ligdorg's house he recovered. But the damage was done. The upper part of his head was now just a scar. Everywhere he went people ran thinking it was a monster. Dilmore made himself a cloak that covered almost his whole head except his mouth. He wore it everywhere. Only taking it off in private. Dilmore said goodbye to Ligdorg at the age of 22 to go exploring the wonders of Athera... Personality Traits: Determined, Funny, Secretive. Curios Ambitions: To see all the land of Athera has to offer Strengths/Talents: Excellent swordmanship, Master at bow and arrow Weaknesses/Inabilities: Can't see well under the cloak, Can be outsmarted easily Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Dilmore is 6 foot 1 and ways 140 lbs. Has large hands. Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Hope you liked it. If you reject I will understand. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Sug 2809 Share Posted March 20, 2015 Your Application is.... - Please add more Lore to your Application, such as the names of towns, countries, etc... - In your Biography, you say that your character stayed at a village with a man, what village? - Describe Ligdorg in detail. - You also say that his hair was light on fire by a crazy bandit, I would suggest changing it to something little more realistic (Housefire, etc...). - Your character also needs more weaknesses to balance your strengths, not just "Can't see well under the Cloak", he needs either mental or physical weaknesses. - Add a bit more in his appearance section of the application, does he have a beard or maybe he has a terrible complexion? Add these types of things to paint a picture in the readers mind. You have 24 hours to edit your application. Failure to make the needed changes within 24 hours will result in the denial of your application. Please send me a PM over the forums once you've made the needed changes. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Sug 2809 Share Posted March 21, 2015 Your Application is.... - Denied Due to you making a second application and getting accepted. Welcome to Lotc Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Sug 2809 Share Posted March 21, 2015 Moved to Denied Forum Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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