[✔] [Accepted] Application

[snowyknight141 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Snowyknight141

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes, here is link: https://www.lordofth...02-application/ and https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126403-pending-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The "no hacking rule" because i hate hackers to.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): The pvp rules are a bit confusing.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: i found it when searching for servers on a minecraft server list website.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when someone takes on a role and they change thier personality, appearance and so on to suit the role they are roleplaying as.

What is metagaming?: Meta gaming (in this server's case) Is when you use info that your character would not know. (The wiki stats that this is not suposed to be done)

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is (in this server's case) Is when someone attacks, harms, or in general just does something to another player to take away thier right or privlage that comes with thier class(Rich,Poor so on).

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: David Allen

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

David is a young 18 year old boy born in a small town neer the northern mountains. Due to the fact he lived so far away from any majour city he was not very well educated. He lived with his Grandfather and his brother, Alec on a farm. His parents passed away when he and his brother where at a young age so they did not remember much about them nor did his grandfather ever tell him about them. He lived a peacful but hardy life in the cold climate, sometimes struggling to grow crops and sometimes having much sucess. He loves to go out hunting with his brother and when he was younger his grandfather would come to and teach them how to hunt and use a bow. Him and his brother often sparr when things get boring. David is a great swordsman and often wins the sparring maches his grandfather often told him that his father was a great swordsman to and that he thinks that David got his talents from his father, but his grandfather would not say anymore about David's parents. David is very brave and often goes on camping trips in the summer with his brother, they soemtimes travel to some of the bigger towns or citys or sometimes they travel around the woods exploring the landscape. These trips has taken David and his brother on many exciting adventures and events. Once David and his brother traveled to the kingdom of Oren and and to it's capital, Petrus to witness the after effect of the assassination of king Andirk Vydra wich took place in Haelun'or (the high elf capital). The after shock of the assassination was a huge uproar. Luckliy David and his brother where able to get away from the kindom before the riots became to dangerous. Due to that trip him and his brother where able to warn his village about what happened to the king and what may come after. Another exciting trip they took was also to Oren and its capital

Petrus, but this time it was after the great war against the Mali'aheral (wich was where the assassin of the former king came from). There they witnessed the crowning of KIng Oliver. Disbite his bravery, David always had one great fear of bees, wasps and hornets. This is because at a young age he was attacked by a swarm of bees wich left him with intence pain for 8 days.

He lived a mostely great and peacful life up until the day where the undeads, lead by thier ruler Iblees attack David's village when him and his brother where gone on a camping trip. When they got back their village was completely distroyed and thier house burned to the ground. David found his grandfather's dead body outside the house and was devistated. From that day on him and his brother swore revenge on the undead and iblees so they set out to become knights.

    

Personality Traits: David is a young, but brave boy who loves to practice sparring and hunting with his brother. He is brave and aventruous, but has a horrable fear if bees, wasps and hornets.

Ambitions: David dreams of one day becoming a knight with his brother and going on exciting quests and missions. He also dreams of being able to use sorts of magic and to be better educated.

Strengths/Talents: David is skilled with the sword, but thinks he can improve. He is also good at hunting wiht the bow and not afraid of striking down his enemys if needed.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Since David grew up on a farm he is not a very educated man meaning his reading and writing are limited.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Medium sized, light wieght brown haired boy who likes to wear black and blue.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Link to pic of my skin on imgur: http://imgur.com/gallery/eBLGV72/new

[Fireheart 2777]

I am hesitant to do so, but without further waiting, I am placing your application down as Pending.

You have been placed on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

 

Your application has been placed on bending for several reasons. Firstly, redefine Powergaming and Metagaming. I do not believe you are defining them correctly and they are not up to my standard. You may use this resource, here, for help.

 

In addition to that your biography contains no Server Lore, besides Iblees. It in addition to that is very cliche and a repeated story I hear. There is a lot of work to be done with this. To get started you can visit the Human Sub-Wiki for help on county and barony names to help you paint a picture of events that happened leading you to possibly visit these towns. I would also like you to incorporate this with a human event that was going around during this time. Whether it be some official being appointed, a King being crowned, or a war being fought. I would like you to also expand on your biography a bit and make it more relevant to David. An easy way of doing this would be to include reasons why David is a good swordsman, or explain why he has certain weaknesses. These are all ideas to help you include Server Lore. By making those changes it reassures me that you have some understanding of server events, history, and know how to navigate the Wiki for information for the future. 

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. I, if no progress is made forward on this application, reserve the right to deny it seeing how it requires a lot of work to be done and could use some reconsideration in some areas.  Make sure you make all edits on this application, Good Luck Applicant!

 

 

 

​P.S. It's not our job to do the application for you. Fix your "Snowy" naming issue on the application. There is a few toward the end of it and then edit that request out. Please and thank you.

With much work and editing this application now lives up to the standards set forth and further more shows all requested changes in the form of corrections. Congratulations on your handwork and on the behalf of the Application Team, welcome to LoTC. Good luck and have fun. If you have any questions please feel free to mentor any member of the Application/Mentor team or myself.

[Fireheart 2777]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum.

Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[mmat 7460]

Player Whitelisted.