[Denied] Applying

[gigiandloki 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: gigiandloki.

How old are you?: 13.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The roleplay-friendly skin.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):I dont think so.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

A friend told me.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The action of acting out a role or way.

What is metagaming?: To go out of the set area of what your meant to do in that game like going over the speed limit.

What is powergaming?: To focus on one goal and staying away from other things like role play and such.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Azganolf Grongard

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Elves 

Character’s age: 67

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

At last there are lots of story's I can tell you in my days, for I do not have any place to call my home I wander the realms searching for a task of good or adventure. But it was not always like that not every one can say they had a good life before but I had everything, I was a high elf and I had everything but one day the wood elf's attacked and me and my family were forsed out of the city.

 

Then we were hunted down when my dad laid down his life for me and my mother to get some were far away so we wanderd the realms and never found a home. As my mother aged here pain grew as each day passed she got closer to death 9 years after my fathers death she passed away as well so I wanderd the realms alone from that day forward But not completely alone.

 

 

Personality Traits: Forgiving, Caring, honorable.

Ambitions: To balance the kingdoms and stop any form of evil.

Strengths/Talents: master at magic, skilled in battle even with his lack of strength, very wise and master of strategy, good leader, very fast and light on his feet.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Dose not like wood elves, the fears of failing people, very weak (not strong).

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 7.9 feet 130 pounds 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• All your definitions need to be expanded upon.
• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect.
• Your biography lacks server lore which can be found here. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Your biography is very short and needs to be expanded upon.
• 67 is very young for an Elf, as your skin makes your character look very old.
• Your  characters appearance needs expansion.
• Your character must be taught magic in-game by an approved teacher and therefore can not apply with magic. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.