[Denied] My Application - Yankeehd

[Yankee 130]

What is your minecraft username?: YankeeHD

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  That you must always stay in character

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):  I will get better acquainted with the war rules in time. 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Through youtube.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The performance of a certain role and acting how the character would have acted and thought.

What is metagaming?: When someone strategically goes "out of character" 

What is powergaming?: When you maximise progress to a certain goal in game.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Vidar Hammerfist

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Mountain Dwarves

Character’s age: 60

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Vidar was born high into the mountains. His mother passed when he was young to a pack of bloodthirsty orcs, they showed no mercy. His father was a strong courageous man who was a rolemodel to his young son. He grew up chopping trees but all he wanted to do is fight. His prize possession is a small gem given to him by his mother. He treasures it  like nothing other. He is strong and muscular and completes any task he is asked no matter how big or small. He dreams of becoming a Dwarven leader and marching his men in to battle. He is good in combat and shows skill with a battleaxe. He will not rest until he avenges his mother and will not go down with out a fight. 

Personality Traits: lust for gold, strong, muscular, determined

Ambitions: to avenge his mother, become a leader

Strengths/Talents: good skills with weaponry,strong, good charisma

Weaknesses/Inabilities: memories of mother, slow, bad reflex and climbing, can get very angry

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Brown/red beard, light blue eyes, stocky, small, 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

^REASONS:

• ^{Your power-gaming and meta-gaming definitions are vague and slightly incorrect, please elaborate further on these when you apply after the duration.}
• ^{The biography lacks lore, please refer to the wiki to grab information for it to place into your biography and link your character into the universe.}
• ^{Cliche of orcs killing parent/s is present, please try to avoid the use of this in later applications, as it seems unoriginal and used by alot of applicants.}
• ^{The application is simply too short, all aspects of the character section need to be expanded. ((Traits, strengths, weaknesses etc.)) Establishing more complex strengths/weaknesses etc, will ensure that your character is well thought out and it will be easier to roleplay as a distinct character.}

Please fix what I have mentioned above in the next 24 hours, after 24 hours you can post another topic, linking this application to your new one with all the mistakes hopefully fixed. PM me if you have any questions or problems and have a nice day.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

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