TheTauFirewarriors application 2nd try

[Will (TauFirewarrior) 2466]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Taufirewarrior

-How old are you?: 18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United Kingdom

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes i do

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i am a film student who likes to play video games and make videos in some games but want to join this server because it looks good

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:5-6 days a week

-How long have you played minecraft?:for a year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: i have played role play on garrys mod rp servers but i want to make a change to minecraft and your server seems like the best in my eyes

-What do you expect this server will be like?:a really great server

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Minephase and minecraftstars and i have not left i am just going to focus more time on this server

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:yes

-Name the 4 races on this server.Humans Elves Dawfs and Orcs

-How did you hear about us?:me and my friend found your trailers on youtube

-Did you vote?:yes

-What was your favourite Law?:Unlawful murder will be punished

-What was your least favourite Law?:i don't have one the laws are there for a reason so why tell everyone your least favourate?

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?ThetauFirewarrior

In-Character:

-Character Name:Shas'O Kais

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:TheTauFirewarrior

-Biography:My character comes from a far off land never seen by the humans and Elves or Dawfs of this land. My character has traveled accross the sea with a friend for a new life for my character is an exile framed for killing his king by his brother and a rival nation where my friend is from. He carries his birth given title from his warrior caste in shame he was nobility and could not be exicuted because of his peoples law. He now travels waiting to settle down and begin a new nation with his friend and his name is conrad.

-Character Age:26

-Character Appearance:Where Samurai like Armour with gold trims with a sword on his back

-Character Personality:Shas'O Kais or just Kais for short he is silent most of the time does'nt talk to anyone but his friend Conrad onless directly asked a question and is interested in cookies for they are not in his homeland.

-Your ambitions:Kais's ambitions are to one day start a nation with his friend Conrad as his second and General of Conrads army and his personal adviser.

-Can your character read or write?:yes

-Can your character mine?:if needs must yes

-Are you a capable builder?yes

-Can you wield a sword?:yes and very well

-Enjoy Farming?:yes it takes your mind off things

-Does your character have any special skills?:]crafting and advanced wall and tower building

-A screenshot of your skin: sorry but the site wont let me upload a picture please dont reject me on that

-Other Information:well this is my 2nd application my first one was not up to scratch so please give me a chance and my friend aswell when he applies because our storys tie together and we would like to form a nation on your great server.

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore.