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[kender123 11]

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Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: kender123

How old are you?: im  16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: i agree with all of them

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

looking for a roleplay server on youtube and i found this quite interesting

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is playing a specific character kind like acting

What is metagaming?: Using things you know from OOC for use IC

What is powergaming?: Having a overpowered character

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Alan Marks

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: wood Elf

Character’s age: 28

Biography: (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):   

                Alan grew up to be extremely biased.  Although still young in Elven society, he has developed a heavy prejudice against high elves, except this is mostly due to his parents and other friends of the village he lived in. but also because the high elves sent  Though it is not much of a village, even going without a name, the small area was made up of elves who had always strongly supported racism against High Elves except Alan, especially so because many of the elves that lived here were older, and passed on their strong thoughts and views to any younger wood elves. 

   Living in this sheltered area for the majority of his life, Alan never interacted with any others outside of his race, and was purely brought up by the community. This was especially so because he had been the first born in the village in a couple hundred years.  Up until the past few years, Alan had everything he could ask for  a loving family, a close community, good friends, but sometimes he just din't feel happy.  Even with this life, something had went wrong- his best friend James in the world, had died.  Of unknown causes, nonetheless. This had only gone on to make the village separate into two groups- the leaders of which, were competing for the open position of overseer.  The previous elder, apparently knowing this would happen, and fearing for Alan, had left behind a letter, expressing his sole wish for Alan not to be caught up, and to explore the world.  And for the past three years, that has been his purpose.

Personality Traits: shy sometimes but very Friendly once you get to know him, caring, and outgoing, sometimes randomly get flirty near girls

Ambitions: to explore the world

 

Strengths/Talents: sneaky, great acher and dagger user and good with animals mostly wolves

Weaknesses/Inabilities: bad with planting

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'6, 112 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

file:///C:/Users/Jeremiah/AppData/Roaming/.minecraft/screenshots/my%20skin.png

Edited July 9, 2015 by kender123

[mitto 2312]

Your definitions are correct but they need expanding, please give an explanation / examples so I know you really know what they are and haven't just copied them.

 

Your biography lacks server lore, it can be found here however:

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera

 

Your strengths and weaknesses aren't balanced.

 

Your strengths, weaknesses and personality traits come out of nowhere. What events in your characters life occurred for them to exist. No one is born a great archer.

 

Please include a skin, if the guide isn't working try this method:

1. Go to minecraft.novaskin.me upload your skin but hitting the button labelled 'Open'
2. Once your skin is on hit the 'Photo' button. You should get a popup of the model of your skin
3. Save that picture.
4. Go to Imgur.com a safe, trustworthy image sharing site. Hit the upload button and insert the model of the skin.
5. Once you have confirmed all of that you should be directed to a page with your model on it.
6. Copy the link to the page and post it into your next app

You can re apply in 24 hours.

[mitto 2312]

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