[Denied] Application

[LoveAndWar 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: LoveAndWar8D

How old are you?:14 turning 15 in august. 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule where you can't kill without a reason to

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): not really

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was just looking for a roleplay server online

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: You use your acting skills and your interactions between players to create a character in which you use their life to act out of.

What is metagaming?: Where a character acts on knowledge that they shouldn't have based of how they have been playing or living on the server. Out of roleplay knowledge.

What is powergaming?: When you only do what you want to get something and you act out of the roleplay or don't consider the roleplay rules.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Cordelia Burden

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

      Born and raised in the kingdom of Kaedrin until the age of 6 when her mom died of salmonella poisoning from the rotten food. The father went MIA in the woods while on a hunting trip. This left her family with no income, so they were forced from their home to become beggars. When her mother died she fled to the woods. She continued roaming around till the point of starvation and dehydration. Wolves later found her laying on the ground and were about to attack when a lone hunter saved her. 

 

   She became his apprentice and learned his trade. By the time she was 14 she had mastered being a hunter. She was happy, but it didn't last long. On a dark snowy night a band of bandits attacked them on their way to a nearby town. The hunter sacrificed his life to save hers, and she fled once again. She became colder to people and doesn't talk as much, unless it's in her interest. She is also a hopeless romantic though and loves children and animals. She currently resides in a small cabin in the woods near a small town.

 

 

Personality Traits: Reserved when speaking usually. Seems cold to others, but she just doesn't know how to approach people. Defensive. Lone wolf personality. Cunning but not smart. Doesn't know how to read or write very well. She would rather flee or be captured than to fight. Soft spot for animals and kids. Has always wanted to be a  mother.

Ambitions:To settle down and have a family one day.

Strengths/Talents: Hunting, gathering, fishing, crafting, strong willed, strong sense of justice, and survival skills.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: reading/writing, cooking, farming, people skills, fighting abilities. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 104 pounds, 5'2" feet tall, 4 inch scar on the left side of her hip from sword practice, lean but not bony. Has virtually no curves. Usually dirty from forest but not smelly.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Lvke 1000]

-Powergaming definition is incorrect.

-Bio contains no lore.

-Bio combines a lot of common clichés, from wolves to dead family members to bandits.

-You can't really be a master hunter by the age of fourteen.

-You're tiny. If you're a hunter, you'd have to use a bow. It seems as though your character wouldn't be strong enough to use one.

-Get a better skin. That skin is not appropriate for any sort of hunter, and it's barely appropriate for the server.

[Lvke 1000]

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