[Denied] Icaruis's Fifth Application

[Icaruis 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Icaruis

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won't be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):  Four times both in this past month first one got denied because I did not use the proper format second got denied for a few reasons, third I got denied because of the incorrect use of powergaming as well as needing more weakness and not adding enough lore, fourth reason is that I put down that I went to silver city and since the elves dislike every other race it was highly unlikely that I would be allowed there.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The war ones they seem fun and fair

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I searched up rp minecraft servers

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:participation in a role-playing game.

Ex: Making up a story and a character for you to play as without talking about real life

What is metagaming?::Metagaming is where you apply information where you couldn't of possible have in the game and you got it from an outside source.

ex:I know where they are!(with no reason to know where they are)

ex: I know who did it!(with no way of knowing in game who did it)

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is where you force something to happen to the other rper such as killing them without them consenting to it

ex: Kills (name) with a swift blow

ex: Dodging more than 1 or maybe two arrows at once

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Icarus

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human Highlander

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  I was born in a small village in the Reformed Kingdom of Oren in The Realm of Athera before it was attacked of course. It was a small village but we could live off everything we made there. My father was a squire for  Lord Adrian de Bar back in his youth so he knew how to use a sword and read and write. He taught me many things while I was growing up like how to read and write as well as the sword and bow among other things such as how to prepare a horse and start a fire. My mother was a simple women who worked the at the village I guess her and my father met and fell in love. I never fit in at the village, never. All the other boys wanted to be like their fathers and nothing more no ambitions. When I wanted to surpass my father in every way. When I was little I imagined myself being a knight or something of the sort for a mighty king who would unite the land.

 

  Then everything changed. When I was about 16 and training my father I suppose looking back on it some bandits came in our town. I guess they were scouting it to see if there was any guards or we were strong enough to protect ourselves, of course we were not we had barely any weapons and we were too small of a town to be noticed by our lord all he cared about was our taxes. So then they came in full force and demanded a payment from us or else they would kill us all. Of course the spinless village leader complied. But when we didn't have enough supplies for them to take since winter was about to start and we couldn't farm to our fullest they got angry and killed a few of us to make us comply we had to give them everything and then some. They took everything and killed anyone who wanted to make a stand. My father and mother were some of the last ones left and right as they were busting down our front door they told me to hide. I hid under the floorboards of our floor for hours until I was convinced it was safe to come out. I wish I didn't. I saw my mother and father dead stabbed but I also saw 4 dead bandits from father's sword. I stumbled out of my house and saw one bandit looting our neighbors. I picked up my father's blade and made quick work of him before he even realized what was happening. Then I started killing them off one by one until none remained. At this point I had no mercy and I was still traumatized. Then I decided to look around for survivors. I looked in the kids old hiding places when we played hide and seek. After I almost gave up I heard a voice, it was a girls voice but I had not heard it before. I followed it thinking why I had not heard this voice before. Then I remember that one of the villagers had been weird, he would take home enough food for two people and buy girls clothes at our shops. When I found the girl she was crying and hiding from me I told her I was like her and was here when they came and killed everyone. She slowly came out to me. I asked her her name and she answered Lexi. Lexi and I set up a home where she used to live with her dad. It was like a little family for a while. We disposed of the body's (well I did she watched...). And set up one of the farms. I think I grew to love her. She taught me how to love again after I went into my shell for a while. I think she loved me too. But then after I went back to the house after tending to our makeshift farm she was passed out on the floor. I quickly but carefully put her into a bed and put a damp cloth over her head to suppress the fever. We had a doctor in our town but he died with the rest of them but I tried to use the medicine on her. It didn't seem to help at all. She kept on getting worse and worse. Until one day she was finally going to die. She knew and I did too she was to weak to keep going. She kissed me goodbye and died in my arms. But this time I didn't go into a shell again, I cried the first time in a long time. Then after a few days I rode out for there was nothing left for me here. When I rode into the town of Silver City I thought I could sneak into the city with a hood over my head since the elves dislike the other races.I just barely snuck in but once I was in no one even batted an eye to me. It seemed it was not unusual for people to keep to themselves here, everyone just minded their own business and went about their day. I did odd jobs to get by and it worked for a while. Finally the Orc-Dwarf war ended. It relieved me because I would not have to worry about wasted lives. Then something surprising happened. Something I could not even imagine happened. A giant worm came into our kingdom and destroyed most of it. We all fled for The Isles of Valor. I didn't have anything left tieing me back here besides its where she died. When we got to Vailor with no other ambitions I thought I should fulfill my childhood dream. To server a king, to help unite the land under one banner, and to insure nothing like this happened again.

 

Personality Traits:Brave, Trusting, Intelligent, Adaptable, Adventurous, Calm, Charming, Confident, Wise

Ambitions:To help crown a king who can unite the land under one banner and serve under him as a general/knight

Strengths/Talents:Good with a sword and a bow, Intelligent, Can read and write, Untrusting, Humble

[GloriaPreussens 798]

Under Review

[GloriaPreussens 798]

This has been denied.

-You made no mention of how you learned to use a sword

-Humans in the Silver City simply wouldn't happen, you'd be killed or thrown out

-You'd have trouble sneaking into a city with one way in

-You killed the bandits one at a time? Unlikely, generally bandits aren't prone to honorable bouts of single combat

If you have questions, feel free to ask me or another AT member. You may apply again after 24 hours (one full day after the denial).

[GloriaPreussens 798]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.