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Out-Of-Character Information

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: richard858

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes and i agree whit the rules

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: about rasicm and sexisem

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

I found it when i was looking for a server to play on and i found this one  on the internet and it looked fun

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?:That you play/become a character and interact as that character whit other persons who do the same this involve responding to situation or events

 

What is metagaming?:that u use information that you get form somewhan of outside the game or that is OOC (Chat room, TS3, Skype) it gives us a advantage in battle, events or just in the game

 

What is powergaming?: when a guy over use his or her power in role-play and that the other guy can't react on it or you are like deadpool whit his abilitie for regenration of his health or like wolferine that he wil be ok after each hit this shall ruin the expirience of the game and there wil be no fun any more about the game and some people who try ro RP but use the hole time GOD Mode

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Kulgha

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:orc

Character’s age:25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

iwas borned in a village called the trog my father wanted to learn my to hunt instead he was killed by a dwarf group while i had to run to warn the village when the uruk warrior form the village where there he was dead my died when i was 16 i was then still furious form what dwafs did to my father my mom died form a snake bite it poison  didn't came out we they did everything to save her since then i was afraid of snakes now i learn to fight whit swords later i shall become a fearsome warrior of the amry form my rex of i shall make a clan and fight in his name i shall take my revange on this dwarfs for what they did i had to do every thing in my own now i shall let them se what a orc can do when i his furious and nobody ever told a story that he survived form a furious orc attack.

After a long time i travled to Athera there at the city called Kodar'Goi i found a orc who wnated to learn me more as a swordman i have also learned tactis form great warlords of the orcs they learned me tactis i never would have now in my own and learned my much about the dwafs while i was looking for locations or names form the dwarfs who killed my father i explored Athera and went undercover to Kal'karaad to find somemore stuff about them i dressed myself as a merchant and went inside i found much stuff like history, matiriaal for there weapons some weakness form them and i found a guy who said some names who attack a orc in my home land i couldn't no the names anymore after some dwarfs wanted to do a drinking contest i drunk so much dwarf beer i didn't no much about that day and forget about the names and location the guy who now them was gone and i have to travel the hole land i didn't went to the elves beceaus we aren't really friends after this i now one thing i need to lead a army against the dwarfs and get this dwarfs that killed my father a lesson to feel the pain and hate they shall feel more then that they shall now that he did something wrong and something nobel for the dwarfs shall fear us again humans, and elves shall fear us also if they se a big warlord is gonna raise and defeat there armys and lead the orc's to victory i went once to the throne room of the rex at Athera but said that what i was gonna do has no bussnis whit his problems and he wnats me away so now im back at my home land trying to let the rex there se the dwarfs shall kill us and not let us leave in peace there shall be war again and i shall help the rex to win we shall go to victory and won't lose for the uruks for our home for our honor and for my father who shall miss this

Personality Traits:Furious and hate dwarfs

Ambitions:to rais a new clan or fight and rais my rank in the army of my rex

Strengths/Talents:good sword fighter and good tactician

Weaknesses/Inabilities:scared of snakes

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): im like 1,85 tall and 75kg i am pretty strong and i always wear my armour

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Edited October 28, 2015 by richard858

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• Your powergaming definition is incorrect. You can find the correct answer in the guide bellow. Make sure to put it into your own words and to not plagiarize. 

• Your overall application is scathing with grammatical errors and mispelled words. Please go through and make these fixes. Grammar and proper spelling is very important in a server revolved around chat-base communication. 

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