[Denied] [Whitelist Application]

[Laurentiu Bantheon 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: irroo

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the combat rules, I like how they are structured.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: One of my real life friends told me about this server.

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is when we imitate the real life in game. On a roleplay server we need to do character development because this is very important for us. We need to do roleplay everytime.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when we use Out of Character informations in In Character Situations or when we use skype, teamspeak 3 etc. to tell In Character informations to our friend.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when we do supernatural actions with our character. 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Laurentiu Bantheon

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Laurentiu Bantheon, son of Arsinel Bantheon and Marioara Bantheon was born in a small village in the misty lands of Barbulesti, far away from the realm of vailor. He grew up in a big house. His childhood was perfect from his perception, but it was not. His alcoholic addict father managed to introduce his mother into a very disturbing psihique situation. After 2 years of stress, his mom decided to leave her son to take care of himself in life. She suicided. Laurentiu was lied by his father, who told him that his mother ran away. He didn`t knew the truth, untill he discovered it in his mother`s diary, hided from the world`s eyes in the basement of the house. He discovered the diary by a mistake. He was supposed to lift a little wine barrel up for his father, still in the same condition. After he learnt truth, he went off of his house and headed where the winds took him to. He went after a 2 years journey to the realm of vailor. His dirty clothes and rusty armor parts denotes his bad live, but live learnt him how to think rationally, how to be a good man and how to make some money. After his first night in Vailor, he tried to hide in the back of a caravan. He succeded. He went to Felsen, the capital of Orenia. His first day there wasn`t so good, but, he made some money, so it wasn`t so bad as it was supposed to be. As the night makes its presence, Laurentiu starts searching for a place to sleep and for a possibly new home.

Personality Traits: Active, calm and curious.

Ambitions: To learn how to fight.

Strengths/Talents: Educated and honest.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being too sensitive.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5'11, 170 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://static.planetminecraft.com/files/resource_media/preview/HorseThief_minecraft_skin-4791232.jpg

Edited December 13, 2015 by Laurentiu Bantheon

[rathat 868]

 

 

Your Application has sadly been

Denied.

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

Barbulesti is not canon land, please use a proper region.

Your bio contains little to no server lore.

Having a drunken father and a dead mother from suicidal means is fairly generic.

Improper grammar.

 

[rathat 868]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.