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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:

Hackcap221

 

How old are you?:

18

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Yes, I am aware

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I have read and agreed 

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

Well considering most RP servers have problems with powergaming, I am glad you are forced to know what it means and that it is not allowed to occur. 

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

 

" ... and they run from roleplay you may drop them but must revive them. "

A couple of instances refer to dropping but more importantly reviving them. I was wondering if this is purely done in chat based RP or if a plug in is responsible. Other then this all other rules make sense. 

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

When my previous RP server was disbanded I was told to come here, finally decided to give it a try.

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: The act of assuming the personality of another, usually in actions, speech, and attitudes. 

What is metagaming?: To use information acquired outside of the RP element and then use that to gain an advantage in RP. 

What is powergaming?: To bypass RP, Lore, storytelling, ect and force actions/traits that would not occur in real life. 

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: 

Baharthle

 

Character’s sex: 

Male

 

Character’s race: 

High Elf

 

Character’s age: 

22

 

Biography :

Birth

We start our story in the house of a wealthy human land owner, on the northern coast of the Holy Oren Empire. Here a wife gives birth to what the husband assumes will be his first son, which imbued him great pride that after 3 daughters he will finally have someone to pass his legacy on too. But unbeknownst to him, his wife had fallen for a wood elf  in her passings and been unfaithful to her husband. Her lover, being the son of an ambassador for the Providence of Laureh'lin could never allow his father the knowledge of what he had done. He then poisoned his lover in there last night together, unfortunately for him the shock of the poison sent her into labor when she had returned home. As she laid there clinging to life, she and her husband called out for help together. There calls were answered by Eshtael of balance, deciding the mother and child still had a destiny to display. He appeared to them and offered them a choice, because the poison had progressed so far only one life could be spared. They would have to choose, save the life of the mother or save the life of the unborn child. Before the the father could speak, the mother quickly whispered " I can not ask my child to bear the burden of my mistrusts. Spare him and take my life so that he may live out his destiny, for I have lived mine.".  With the balance restored Eshtael laid his hands on the belly of the mother and in a bright light disappeared. As the husband's eyes readjusted all that lay before him was a baby elf, born in the winter of 1517. This elf was unlike his father before him, because of her brave sacrifice she was able in enact one final thing before her passing. She washed away the father and herself from the body of the child. Leaving only pure elf in its wake, making him not human or wood elf, but a pure high elf.

Early Life

After being on a few days old a wizard prophesied the elf would either follow in his fathers path, or become a great spiritual teacher. His father preferred the first and kept the boy in solitude but with great luxury. He shielded him from the knowledge of his mothers wrong doings and that of the outside world almost entirely. His father taught him reading, writing, the art of book keeping. So that one day his son could still carry on his fathers legacy. He eventually reached the age of 20 with little experience of the world outside of his fathers library the the books enclosed within. 

The 4 

One day, overcome with curiosity, the son escaped through a window and rode through the countryside on one of his fathers horses. As we went we has shocked by the sight of an aged human, then of a sick dwarf, then a dead orc. The sudden reality of old age, disease, and death seized and sickened the elf. Finally, he saw a wandering cloud temple monk searching for injured souls to retrieve. When he got back to his house he inquired in passing to his father about the monk. His father explained that the monks had renounced the world and sought release from fear of death and suffering. 

Realization

For a time the elf returned to his home and went about the life, still troubled by the sights he had beheld. One night as he wandered the palace alone, he realized the luxuries that had once pleased him now seemed boring. He looked around and saw his father and sisters asleep and reflected on the old age, disease, and death that would overtake them all while he watched. He realized there was no way he could bear watching his family age and die while he barely aged. He decided it would be best if he left, that very night he gathered his belongings, shaved his head, and changed his clothing for more modest clothing. Then set out to begin his quest for enlightenment. 



Personality Traits:

Easy to talk to, Quiet, and Humble.

 

Ambitions:

Enlightenment and the advancement of others. 

 

Strengths/Talents:

Because of his extensive education: Very strategic and generally smart

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Having rarely left the house has no combat experience what so ever.

Not very "street smart"

Easily deceived 

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

He is around 6 feet 6 inches tall, weighing 176 pounds. Blue eyes with bleached hair, also with extending pointy ears usually covered by his hair. 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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Edited by Bubbles
Not all my Bio seems to be showing. I can submit the rest if it doesnt show up for staff.
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This app was a good read. However you do have one big flaw which needs to be fixed:

  • Your birth lore is a bit impossible to happen, to be honest. There is not a single way to purify a bloodline, an certainly not the way you described. What's even worse is that the race you chose is high elf, a race of people who strongly believe in purity in blood, making your situation harder. Please, remake the first part of your biography so it's less confusing and race inducing.

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Once finished, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT for help!

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Your app has been denied for following reasons:

  • The applicant requested a denial so he might work on his biography.

You may re-apply in 12 hours. If you need any help, feel free to contact me or any other AT for help!

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