[Denied] Out_Of_Character

[Miriam Enya 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Toboe_ 

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The roleplaying rule, where you must stay in character

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I just so happened to be looking up rp servers with my little sister.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: It’s when you become one with the character you are given and you’re able to communicate with others as one with your character.

What is metagaming?: It’s a strategy  or method used in gaming

What is powergaming?: It’s when you’re intreating with other gamers in video games and etc.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Miriam Enya

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 16

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

    On her 16 birthday, her parents and younger sister were killed by a strong  and because of this incident, she was so horrified, she lost her memory that day. She woke up in one of the villages with an Elven maiden who’s name is Destiny. Destiny cured her and so Miriam is on a quest to collect all her missing fragments to revive her memory.

 

    Before her parents were murdered, they were going to tell her that she was part Aengul & Daemon(Sorry if too over powered). The man who killed her parents is after her, but he doesn’t know where she is at the moment. Miriam ends up traveling through the most of the villages on the server and at the end of her quest, the man finds her and attempts to extract her very essences, but she defeats him.

Personality Traits: Shy, sly, funny, smart, headstrong, frail, tolerant, graceful, slender, selfless, kind, caring, sweet, lovable,  gentle, flawless, carefree, reckless, striking, 

whimsical, soft, delicate, dainty, quick, fierce, protective, frail, openminded, agile,  quiet, playful, sensitive,

Ambitions: Getting her memories back

Strengths/Talents: Singing, double wielding, fighting, 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Being in tight spaces, being alone,

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Height- 5’4 

Weight-110 

Hair- Ankle-length rich curly brown

Eyes- Golden-Brown

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Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet good enough to accept. Given you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

-Your powergaming and metagaming definitions are incorrect.

-You may not apply as a character under 16.

-It is very cliche to do the 'My parents are dead' thing.

-Please be a descendant race, you can not be part aengul and daemon.

-Your memories can not simply be lost in fragments due to a scary experience.

-LOTC lore must be included within your biography.

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

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