[Denied] [Pending] Application

[Adverax 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Adverax
How old are you?: 16
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):  I'm quite aware this is sever is  PG-13.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have read all of the rules and I agree to them.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule i agree with is no hacks and add-ons, of course I don't want such destructive actions on an exciting server.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no, not at all
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out about Lord of the Craft while skimming through a list of role playing servers.
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you take on a certain persona according to the story or scene that's provided.
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you use information your roleplayed character never knew to your advantage for exemple saying the name of someone althought they never presented themselves to you
 What is powergaming?: powergaming is just forcing an action on someone without giving them a possibility or doing anything
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Edward D. Arlen
Character’s sex: Male
Character’s race: Human,highlander
Character’s age: 19
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
Young Edward lived in a poor and rundown village in the Republic of Salvus, eventhough he lived in a place of poverty he did not mind.He was happy to be with his
family and lived a cheerish life for years.But at the age of 15 his little brother had become ill and there was no way to treat his condition without money to buy
medicine.Edward didn't have the courage to tell his brother he would die so he ran and he ran he grew angrier and angrier at the fact they did not have the suffient
money and power to support his family.As ran enraged out of the village he heard an echo saying "so you want power don't you, young one", yelled 'who are you ? where
are you ?" out of the darkness a man in black robes appeared, he stated that he is "The Warlock" and said he could give him to courage and power.Edward being naive
asked how he could obtained such power as he says,The Warlock said "leave it to me, so do you accept my offer ?" Edward agreed to the offer.The Warlock then proceed
to temporaliy removing his emotions except for despair,joy,hatred,anger,courage and bloodthirst.He then gave him a small knife and told him to return to village and
do as he will.Th warlock watched from the distance as he sent the child into the village and he laughed and snikered as if he just won a game and obtained a new
toy.When Edward reached his village he countinued to slaughtering everyone and he did it with a smile, he murdered everyone and left no one alive except for his
family.He grabbed all of the corpses money and gave to the merchant and took the medicine.When he entered his house, his parents were relived to see he was back but
saw that he was covered in blood and went out of their house they saw the tragedy their son had commited and were terrified.Edward exclaimed "i did it mom and dad I
got the medicine we can now save my brother" he came closer and closer to give them the medicine but they pushed him away and called him a monster.The Warlock had seen how everything came into place and release the spell he set on the young child.Edward then realized what he had done and ran away in fear, never to see his precious family again.Years later Edward had lost trust and trained himself to an extreme so that tragedy that befalled him once will never happen again.

 

Personality Traits: Edward's personality is quite cold he doesn't trust anyone ,he is a lonewolf.He lives by his own code.He is a nomad and never drops his guard for seacond.

 

Ambitions: His ambition istoo prevent tragedies as his

Strengths/Talents:He is cunning,quite skillful with any type of blade and is very agile.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: His stess from not being carefree can lead to exhaustion,not only that but he is rush in options.He might be cunning  but if agitated he might lost it and attack very sloppy.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is  5 ft 9 and weights 170 lb.His hair is black as night but stained with a shred of white on his forehead and his eyes are as orange is a burning flame, eyes of a burning will.He wears dark shaded clothing and a dark orange bag around his back.He has an arrow sized scar on his back.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 
 
 

 

[Imi 425]

Under review.

[Imi 425]

Pending:

Your app has been put on pending for the following reasons...

-Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect. Please correct this. Feel free to use google, but write the definition in your own words.
-Your power-gaming definition is very vague. Please try to explain yourself more.
-Your backstory contains a very common scenario. Try to make it more original, and avoid cliches.
-You have not used at least 3 pieces of server lore in your backstory. I'll link the wiki below for you to look through.
-The current monarchy's on the server do not tend to enslave or buy children, and so it does not fit in with server lore. Try making some improvements to your app to make it lore-approved.


You have 24 hours to make these changes. If you need any help or have any questions, feel free to contact me. Good luck!
 

[Imi 425]

Denied.
Your app has been denied as you failed to make the required changes in the time given:

-Your backstory needed to contain 3 pieces of server lore.
-Your backstory was very cliche.

You must wait 24 hours before applying.

[Imi 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.