[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] application

[bahbou 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:bahbou123456

How old are you?:16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:the roleplaying rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?i searched mediaeval servers

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:when you act as an character and not your real self.

What is metagaming?: when you say something that you're character doesn't know or could  never know .

What is power gaming?:power gaming is when you are not realistic , like killing 30 orcs by you're self or escaping prison . 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:frerin Thorkon

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:mountain dwarf

Character’s age:30 years old

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):my character is going to be 30 years old .He is a soldier and so was his father and his father before .He serves as an infantry and battles in the front line .He has a huge scar on his cheek because of a previous battle and 12 years ago was flogged for stealing a piece of gold before becoming the great warrior he is now .He is loyal and trustworthy ,he is an orphan,his parents died 15 years ago when orcs attacked the city ,mother died just a few hours before his father 15 years ago , his mother was grabbed by the neck and struck with an axe by an orc which resulted in bleeding out  .His father was killed in battle by an orc , he was in the front line when 5 goblins herded him and stabbed him dead , so from that day he seeks revenge and if he sees an orc he does not hesitate on killing him .He has long raid hair ,and is thin and tall for a dwarf , but he is strong mentally and physically .He is the smartest infantry , he sometimes gives ideas and tactics to the war commander (general ).

 my character was born in a dwarf city in the mountains and only left if there are wars . He helps his friends in the city mines when he is not commanded to do anything and teaches his co-soldiers great ways of fighting fight .Frenin now is currently serving as a guard , he helps his friends  at the ancient mines of Moria where he spends his time trying to spot gold for his ambition .he has a true love towards ores especially gold , he was once again seen stealing but he was left of because he is a great soldier .He now keeps praying for a war to happen especial a war against orcs  so he can have his revenge .

Personality Traits:mostly grumpy but is kind to friend  ,he is brave and loves killing orcs

Ambitions :proud of his position,loves gold

Strengths/Talents:mining,strategic tactics

Weaknesses/Inabilities:farming,riding a horse ,not very fast at running

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):he is 140 cm tall and is 50 kg ,he has long red hair and beard  and is quit thin and tall for a dwarf .

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

Edited January 25, 2016 by bahbou
i made the description longer and more realistic

[JEEGK 1367]

1 hour ago, Jake From Statefarm said:

Your application has been put on PENDING.

 

Your story is too light, it must be at least TWO paragraphs. Also, you cannot have kids (still alive) as it is something you must acquire in rp.

 

Your story is also very cliche, your father/ parents dying by Orcs. Seek to think of something more original.

 

You'll have 24 hours to complete this.

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[JEEGK 1367]

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