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[fsaber 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Fsaber

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes I am

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Cyber bulling  because  its bullying all together is not right. I see it happen on the internet then I see it in person

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Can I record and post on YouTube.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friends  asked me to play with them and I think it is a good Server for my YouTube channel

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is to like act a certain role. it is  like real life everything is real. You take a role and you act that role like it is real life.

What is metagaming?: Its like out of character.For example lets say you play a game on a map and you already know the map because you played in it many times. Play knowing what your doing. You know the best place to hide and attack.

What is powergaming?: Power gaming is becoming really good at a game that you know everything about it and you become extremely powerful at times and makes it sometimes unfair to other players. You may even sacrifice role play to powergame. 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Jacob

Character’s sex:Male

Character’s race:

Character’s age:16

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):I was born to a lovely family but when I was 1 week something happened  and my mother put me in to a flowing river and I was found by a mother wolf which nursed me. I was seen by a shepherd and at night he came in to the wolves cave and took me. He than raised me with his wife to the man I am today. I was raised to them being my mother and father and they told me that ever since I was young. As I grew I knew I wasn't there son as they told me. I had heard of a women who could tell your past in town . So one day i headed to town to trade with my father. While my father traded I headed to the woman who could tell your past. She told me everything, and I was shocked. So i hid in town until eventually they found me. I told them everything but they didn't want me to leave but I had to leave. 

                         I found a job far away from my home.Life was terrible for me. I had entered the depressing phase of life. I got fired from my job and was homeless. I didn't know what to do,so I went to live on my own in the forest. I seemed happy there but deep down I was hurting not knowing my father and Mother. So I grabbed my things and began my search working any job on my way to find my Mother and Father.

Personality Traits:,loving,caring,Courageous , Adventurous ,Reliable 

Ambitions:Help others,Find Mother and Father

Strengths/Talents: adaptable to any environment,Good with animals,very athletic, fast learner   

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Talking to humans , grammar , giving orders,

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):weight 186,height 6'3'

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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Your application has sadly been denied due to the some things that need to be changed. Don't worry though! You may reapply after the next 24 hours and within that time you may redo your application. Please I ask, don't reapply before the requested time or you will be denied by default since this is our policy. Message me if you have any concerns! These changes need to be made in your next application: 
 

~Your biography includes no race. I would suggest being a human from the skin you selected and if you want to be a certain sort of human, you can even look at the wiki for divisions of humans (Southerner, Heartlander, etc.)

~Your biography is written within first person which seems kind of odd. I wouldn't say this is a major error of why it isn't accepted but remember, you are writing your character's story so it would be in third person preferably. When in game though, you'd speak in first person. This is merely a suggestion so your application is more appealing.

~Your biography doesn't include a shred of server lore. I would search through the wiki for this. This could include anything from major events, religion, or major cities in your biography in order to show you comprehend server lore well. I also ask you remove the chunk about someone 'telling his past' since that really isn't possible except without a farseer (a shaman of sorts). 

~Your skin, from what it appears, has been overused and I have seen numerous versions of it on the server. I suggest you find a skin that hasn't been as commonly used yet still remains relevant to the server and your character. Also, using a skin that appears to be a thief makes RP a little bit more difficult for you sometimes since people are hesitant and may not want to be talking to someone with something covering their face (creepy and ominous). This last sentence is just a tip, you can ignore it if you wish!

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