application [Denied] Application

[_Enderet_ 0]

Ingame Name:_Enderet_ (May Change In Future, To RedPowerDragon)
Character Name:Gruindîr
Character Race:Elf
Age:102

I am aware that the server is PG-13

I discovered this server while searching for good role play servers.

I have read and agree to the rules.

I agree most to the rule that bans any modern slang, such as bro, dude, or yo.

I have no problem with any one of the rules.

Gruindîr is bold and unafraid to speak his mind. If he wishes you to know something, he shall say so. He considers all his options carefully.

Gruindîr wishes to be a great ambassador between the humans and elves. Thus, he travels amongst humans often.

Gruindîr's strength include natural grace, which most elves have, and a natural talent for combat. However, fighting two skilled opponents at once will quickly tire him.

Gruindîr is not very good at making split-second choices. In several ways, this is not a flaw. But in combat, this may prove his downfall.

Gruindîr is very light, weighing little over 113 pounds. He is a relatively tall figure for humans, at 6'4. His eyes are a glittering red that disturb many who approach him.

I am sorry, but it will not allow me to post a screenshot of my skin.

 

 

[_mkkk_ 194]

[_mkkk_ 194]

Your application has sadly been denied due to the some things that need to be changed. Don't worry though! You may reapply after the next 24 hours and within that time you may redo your application. Please I ask, don't reapply before the requested time or you will be denied by default since this is our policy. Message me if you have any concerns! These changes need to be made in your next application: 

~Your application is missing a heavy amount of the format needed. This needs to be the mainframe of what you use in your next application. Please read any instructions on the application too since they are important to you being accepted such as not to plagiarize definitions and to include server lore into your biography. Here is the format:
 

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:

How old are you?:

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:

What is metagaming?:

What is powergaming?:

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:

Character’s sex:

Character’s race:

Character’s age:

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Personality Traits:

Ambitions:

Strengths/Talents:

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

~And your skin isn't present upon the application. You either need to update it onto the application or either send me a link to it. I would suggest uploading the skin to imgur and placing the link on here so I can put it on and see for myself in MC (this is a last resort). Otherwise, I suggest taking a screenshot using the F2 button and then going to /run, type %appdata%, go to .minecraft, then go to screenshots in order to place the image onto your desktop, and then upload it to imgur or onto the application so I may see it. Also, I wouldn't suggest having an elf with red eyes. Only orcs/goblins/dwarves seem to carry that eye color.

[_mkkk_ 194]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.