[Denied] Application

[LilyRock1 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: LilyRock1

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with all the rules, I think they all make sense

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understood all the rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me about it

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: acting out a role in a role-playing game

What is metagaming?:  Using outside knowledge to rank higher in a game

What is powergaming?:  Directing a character's existence and developement to a certain angle at the exclusion of all other

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Lily Black

Character’s sex: female

Character’s race: human (heartlander)

Character’s age: 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

She was born in a big city; her parents was noble and rich. But she don't like this kind of life. She was excluded by the society, because she was a rebel and she didn't want to behave like a noble.  Her older brother was run away when she was only six years old, so, she did it too, when she become 15.

She started traveling around the world and learn sword skills.

She lives alone. She trust only a few person. She has two personalities: she can be bad and angry with the world or depressed and isolated.

Personality Traits: clever, mysterious, friendly only with a few friends, shy

Ambitions: she wants to find herself, travel and fight

Strengths/Talents: she can hides very well, expecially in the woods

Weaknesses/Inabilities: she is afraid of water

Appearance: short, red straight hair, green eyes

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-You plagiarized on your power-gaming and meta-gaming definitions.

 

-Plagiarizing again in any form will result in being banned from applying for a duration of time.

 

-Your character's biography has a fair amount of grammatical errors, making it hard to understand.

 

-Your character's biography is too short.

 

-Your character's biography includes no server lore.

 

-Your character's info appears to have little bearing to the character described in the biography.

 

-You failed to include a screenshot of your character's minecraft skin, or even the question asking for such.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.