[Denied] Nyemoco's Application

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:assassin_moco

How old are you?:12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The abuse of glitches or any exploits are not tolerated

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:participation in a role-playing game

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game

What is powergaming?:is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Nyemoco

Character’s sex:male

Character’s race:Undead

Character’s age:18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Nyemoco was quite happy soul. He loved to play, but his parents were more depressed than him! He didn't like being alone, but that's how he had to grow up. So he moved out on his own when he became 18, hoping to find more people like himself. He was wrong, everyone was just as boring and lifeless as the people back at home.

 

So one day, the God of the Underworld (or ender dragon) didn't see why he was such a happy person. He, well, didn't allow people to the underworld if they were all positive and happy. Everything there was like the opposite of what things were like at the overworld. Things were wanted tto be positive up at the overworld, while at the underworld everything was meant to be depressing. Since Nyemoco was always alone, he taught himself how to fight and defend himself. So the God of the Underworld decided Nyemoco would be a perfect  hero for the overworld, considering they didn't have many heroes from the underworld at the overworld. So he was sent to the overworld to become a hero of darkness.

Personality Traits: Happy/jittery

Ambitions: become a well known hero/while being known as one of the few underworld people who made it to be a hero at the overworld

Strengths/Talents: Dark Magic/becoming a hidden shadow

Weaknesses/Inabilities: does everything half as well when under light/unable to fight well without magic

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):height=8 ft. weight=300lbs

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imgur.com/UmfUYeJ

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Your application has sadly been denied due to the some things that need to be changed. Don't worry though! You may reapply after the next 24 hours and within that time you may redo your application. Please I ask, don't reapply before the requested time or you will be denied by default since this is our policy. Message me if you have any concerns! These changes need to be made in your next application: 

~This is your First Warning of plagiarism. I have found both of your definitions for metagaming and powergaming upon the wikis of each detailing what they mean. If you do anything like this again, you will be banned from applying for specific amount of time. Please, read the description not to copy definitions and make your own! 

~Your biography doesn't include a shred of server lore. I would search through the wiki for this. This could include anything from major events, religion, or major cities in your biography in order to show you comprehend server lore well. Also, remove another of this underworld and the 'God of the Underworld' please since that isn't in accepted lore at all. Please refer to our wiki!

~No character is allowed to be made having been taught magic in the first place and especially no interaction with dark arts users. So this needs to be removed from your strengths too. Your strengths, ambitions, and weaknesses all need to be edited due to this.

~Your skin is rather 'sketchy' from the looks of this. I would go for something more neutral and normal otherwise people in-game are going to be hesitant of you since it appears you are a thief. This is merely a suggestion.
 

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