[Denied] My application

[awesomefun21 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: awsomefun12

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware this is a PG 13 server

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The villain rule

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? No I understand all the rules clearly

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: When one is to change their behavior to assume a role

What is metagatming?: any action or method used in a game to transcend the ruleset 

What is powergaming?: to get the most favorable end possible

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Claire Lancealot

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 32

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  During the battle of Marnadal my parents (Julia and John) were killed, I was alone in our home of The fortress of Kal’Ordholm, but soon it was under siege I was 18 then and as I was trying to leave the fortress before the walls came crashing down. I managed to escape the fort but I found myself in the middle of the clutches of The Holy Orenian Empire and their allied forces with no other option I punched a knight and took his sword. I tried to fight through all the madness but I had little experience with a sword. I was captured and brought to Felsen. One night I managed to escape I was 19 then. After a year of traveling I found myself in Urgaun where a group of thieves recruited me. I gladly accepted their offer since I thought I needed some money. 2 years after working with them I was offered a job, one that involved killing someone (which oddly enough I never done). I asked the man the details on this job and he told me he would give me his lucky amulet. I thought I would be able to do it since I have became very sneaky while working for the guild. I accepted the job and he gave me the sword I needed. When I entered the house I couldn't believe my eyes. It was my uncle, I saw the man and he told me I had no choice or he would kill us both. I killed the man and took his amulet, but when I touched it I felt different. I wasn't in control or I was I couldn't tell at the time but I slit my uncle's throat and threw his body in a fire. I then laughed and laughed for about 30 minuets. I returned to the guild and killed everyone everyone. I never let go of that amulet and soon I left Urgaun and went to the north coast which was sacked, after that I had one goal, to take over the world. That amulet showed me something and that "something" was that only I should be seated as the queen of the land and I chose to pursue that. I spent years (im 30 now btw) trying to make a living and soon I found a decent sword which I would one day kill the king of Urgaun with, and take his throne and soon lay waste to the land. During my time when I was building up a living I became a great fighter I killed at least 50 people and I found a passion to kill people.

Personality Traits:  Evil, Killer, Bloodlust, Greedy

Ambitions:To take over the entire world

Strengths/Talents:A great fighter, Sneaky

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Lose of amulet will make her forget everything (I mean everything)

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Height: 4 foot 2 inches

Weight: 168 pounds

Clothing: Red dress

Eyes: Red

Hair: Black

Eyebrows: Dark red

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Denied

• Your definitions are plagiarised from wikipedia, this is your only warning for this. Doing so again will result in a ban from applying for a certain period.
• You have applied as a human but make it out as if you were brought up by dwarves, Urguan is the Dwarf Kingdom. You would most likely be Orenian if you were a Human as they are the only Human nation right now. Please add some lore relating to Humans if you insist on applying on one, the lore for the race can be found here.
• This amulet you mention does not exist and would not be able to have the magical properties you listed without a Global Moderator or Event Team member's permission, please remove anything relating to it.
• Being evil, bloodthirsty and raised as an assassin is incredibly overused, please come up with something more original.
• A human cannot be queen of Urguan for reasons I listed above.
• Change your weaknesses accordingly to what I mentioned above.
• 4'2ft is in the category of Dwarfism for a fully grown human adult, unless you intentionally meant this please edit it so you are at least over 5 feet tall.
• A pure human cannot have red eyes, only those with a dark elf heritage can have such eye colour and even then their skin tone would darken consequentially. Please remove the red eyes or give a legitimate reason for having them.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any comments or questions, please feel free to PM me!

[CheekyNolan 5420]

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