[Denied] My aply

[Hakeem_Lyon 3]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Hakeem_Lyon

How old are you?: almost 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes, i am

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes , i did

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: be respectfull

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

youtube

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: its like pikking characthers and play them like u really are that caharacter

What is metagaming?: idk

What is powergaming?:idk

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Hakeem

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): it all started when his village got attacked by a bounch of orcs and his parent´s tryd to stop them . THey got killed and he swered  that one day he would get revenge . Back then he was a little kid . He spend his whole lif in the woods alone till now .......

Personality Traits: Hated by orcs and orcs hated by him. Doesen´t talk alot.

Ambitions: He would like to be a hunter.

Strengths/Talents: fast and good at parkour , good at dodging attacks.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: his not to strong

Edited February 20, 2016 by Wiseacres
The format was wtf

[tilly 5115]

• You might want to take a look at your definition of metagaming and powergaming - feel free to look it up, but remember to put it into your own words!
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the dukes war in Vailor!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• When writing your character's biography, please refrain from using the cliche of 'my parents were killed and now I am orphaned'.
• You have failed to attach a skin! If you need help with getting a screenshot, follow this guide.
• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

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