[Denied] [Pending] partner app

[Partner 1]

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Partner

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule about no metagaming.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: It's a huge medieval role-play server.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing the role of a character that is not yourself.

What is metagaming?: Taking outside information(information your character doesn't know) and using it to your advantage. 

What is powergaming?: It's basically trying to play God by doing thing you couldn't really do. 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Samuel

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: dwarf

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Samuel was born and grew up in The Horde Of Dunamis Keep. His father and mother were very loving and kind. His father was very special because he was a warrior for the Keep. His father passed away before Samuel was even 5 years old. This made Samuel want to grow up to be like his father and prove his family's name. Samuel's mother grew sick around age 10 and this made him want to show his mother he was just as good as dad in battle. Samuel signed up to fight in the next battle and so he did. He was the top warrior he killed 23 people in a single battle, His mother was very proud. Sadly his mother passed away a year later to a unknown illness. Although normally that would make someone sad and not want to fight. This made Samuel stronger and want to fight even harder. 

 

12 years later, Samuel is married to a beautiful wife and has 2 beautiful children. The children are just like him and look to be in the army one day. 

Personality Traits: Samuel is kind, caring, helpful, creative, resourceful, extremely clever,  somewhat selfish at times.,  eccentric,  and a bit insane.

Ambitions: He aspires to be a very smart and fierce warrior that looks to help in any battle possible to prove himself to the ones around him who love him the most.

Strengths/Talents: Samuel is knowledgeable, a great fighter but oddly only with a spoon, creative, resourceful, inventive, often has ideas that are just crazy enough they might work, and is great at clothing design.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Samuel can't bow-fight, or fist fight, he is speedy, but is clumsy and often runs out of breath. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He has brown hair, bright brown eyes, weighs 150 pounds, is 4 foot 3 inches tall, is averagely built, and it varies on what he wheres(his current outfit is a brown coat with a long ascot, black pants, and brown boots).  

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

 

 

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Your application has been put on [PENDING]

 

What this simply means is; your application is good! Do not fret, however, in order for this application to be accepted there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. Do not make a new app, simply use the 'Edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

-Your powergaming definition is wrong. 

Use this guide to help you, though remember to put it in your own words:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying

 

-Your biography contains little to no server lore. Please add some:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

-You can not be a great fighter with a spoon.

 

-There is no possible way any person at the age of 10 can kill 23 men. 

 

-Your character is too tall to be a dwarf:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dwarves

 

-Please find a skin that better suits your character

 

If you want help of need me to review your app again once you have made the necessary changes. Please visit my profile and send me a Private Message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

 

 

You have not made the necessary changes within the allotted time

 

You may reapply in  12 Hours.

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