[Denied] anorma101's Application request

[anormann101 0]

 

My Information

 

 

Minecraft Account Name : anormann101

Age: 13

I am aware that this server is PG - 13

I have read the rules for the server and I agree with the terms

The rule that I agree with the most is the rule that no one can post anything that can cause glitches or bugs in someones computer

I completely understand each rule

I found Lord of the Craft from my cousin 

       Definitions
 

roleplaying is when you pretend that you are something that you want to be

Metagameing a strategy that transcends that games rule set

Powergameing to play a game so much to complete a goal

My Character

Name: Faylen Normoira (unless my name will automaticly be my username than that is fine)

Sex: Female

Race: Half-Elf

Age: 43

Biography: Faylen Normoira (she likes people to call her Fay) is a young wood elf that lives in a small town. Her life was filled withe teasing and discrimination because of the mixed blood inside of her. Her mother died at the age 79 she lived a full life, for a human. Fay would constantly run home crying to her elfish father and all he could do was rub her back until she calmed down. Fay was done with being bullied so she ran away from her town to go to the big city filled with humans she would hide her ears withher long hair that covers of her ears. In this new city she will find a job and start a new life ,but she has no idea about what lies ahead.

 

Personality traits: Kind, likes to listen to other peoples conversations, socially awkward

Ambitions: to have friends

Strengths/Talents: Good at sneaking around,and getting Information

Weaknesses: Not good at loyalty, sees everyone as a bad person

Appearance: Long light Brown Hair, green eyes. 6'8'' and is 120 pounds

 

Photo of my skin:

http://imgur.com/1ceiiXN

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-You plagiarized on your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions.

 

-Plagiarizing again in any form will result in being denied.

 

-Your biograhpy refers to her just as a wood elf, yet you specified her race as half-elf. Please rectify such and put down one or the other.

 

-Your character's biography is far too short.

 

-Your character's biography is far too short.

 

-Your character is far too tall for what she is. (6'8 is massive!) Likewise, being so tall and only being 120 pounds would make her emaciated. (I'm 102 and 5'11 IRL, and I'm skinny to the high heavens!)

 

-Wood elves have significantly darker skin.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

 

 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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