[Denied] Spooky626's application

[Milgur, Dwarf Of Erebor 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Spooky626

How old are you?: 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes, i am.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: hacking, abusing glitched or hacked clients.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no, there are not.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: from watching or looking up for servers on google or youtube.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): no.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: a game where you are a person that is not you in real life, but you act like a different person and other people act the same way. for example, if i would do an action, i would type in *gilmur swung his sword at the beastly orc*.

What is metagaming?: a strategy, action, or method.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: a style of interactive games.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Gilmur, Dwarf Of Erebor

Character’s sex: (male or female?) male.

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) dwarf.

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) my character's age is 50.

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Gilmur was born in the mountain of Erebor on 1527, fall. he has traveled miles away from his home, Erebor, and faced enraged creatures and met unlikely friends. he has traveled and met the humans and elves, and he has always followed orders from commanders or the king himself. the only battle he has ever been in was a battle in the ages of the war, and he had fought many orcs in those days.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) he likes things like large weapons, such as a hammer, a battleaxe, or even a catapult. he also likes a cup of beer once in a while. he dislikes orcs because he has a habit of fighting. he also has a habit of creating unique weapons, such as a sword with a group of three sharp points on the edges of the sword.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) he aspires to be a great warrior, s when he was in the war, he was only a warrior in training. he also wants to build amazing weapons to sell.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) he is amazing at forging weapons such as a battleaxe, sledgehammer, or even a broadsword. he also has a large strength when holding a heavy weapon or item.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) one inability is that he is horrible at shooting arrows, and missed by a meter on his first try. a weakness he has is how ignorant when he is fighting with brutal force.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) i WILL be changing my skin soon, so please do not complain. the skin is a Dwarven Erebor guard.

 

[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

- Unfortunately, your metagaming and power gaming definitions are both incorrect. Feel free to visit HERE for help with them, but use your own words!

 

- If your character is fifty years old, he would have been born in 1508, as the current year on LotC is 1558.

 

- LotC actually shares very little lore with Lord of the Rings, and thusly Erebor does not exist.

 

- Please include server lore in your biography. You can find server lore on LotC's wiki,

 

- Your biography should be a decent two paragraphs long.

 

- Add non-combat based strengths and weaknesses.

 

- Add an appearance description.

 

- Please upload a screenshot of your skin -- I recognize it may be difficult, but please try to follow the guide and upload an image of your skin, as it is necessary for acceptance.

 

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

Good luck on your next application!

[jamesb 218]

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