[Denied] Application

[Serge4nt_Forge99 12]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Serge4nt_Forge99.

How old are you?: I am currently 19 years old.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree most with the rule of no "hostile and toxic behaviour" aimed at anyone.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No I completely understand the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I heard it through a friend of mine on my way to school.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: This is when a person takes on the role or attitude of a character and plays out their life in a fictional world.

What is metagaming?: The use of external factors which affects the game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: A style of playing a game such as storytelling etc.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Alcibiades

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human-Heartlander

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) My character was born in 1494, 19 years before the descendant races arrived at "The Isles of Vailor" after fleeing Athera. My character by birth was born to a highlander family in Athera, however when the heartlanders urbanisation expanded his family felt forced to move from their lands and home. His father in protest of in his words "greedy expansionism!" by the the heartlanders went in anger to them so they might see sense and take the highlanders into consideration in 1498. However my character aged only 4 at this stage never saw his father again... His mother confused of her husband not coming back fled (believing that in her husbands anger he had acted violently and may have been killed). She took her son (Alcibiades) as far away from the heartlanders of "The Kingdom of Renatus" as possible. However in the new lands that she settled with her son it was not as well known to her as her old land. The grass that was edible in their old home was different to this new grass material known as Saffvil in the new land. With Alcibiades getting thinner by the days and his mother getting weaker from her long travels across Athera she became dehydrated and caught an illness. In her time of poor health her mind was torn and she mistook the Saffvil for an edible herb. Despite its smell his mother thought it was a new form of fherb on the land where they went to. Cooking it for a meal with other herbs she had found, she tasted it before giving it to Alcibiades. With the presence of Saffvil she died of poison in late 1501. Alcibiades who was too young at 7 to fend for himself and had also grown ill from the same disease as his mother, was lying down slowly dying until he was found by a travelling heartlander.

 

Several months later Alicibiades got better and found himself in "The Kingdom of Renatus" where he was reared by a heartlander family under the canon faith. At first he was angered by the idea of being in the home of those who (he was told by his mother) killed his father, but he realising they saved him he calmed down and kept his past to himself and lied to his new family. His new home was now in the capital of Renatus being Kaer Angren. He grew up as a carpenter but had no interest in work like his new "father" had. Despite his lack of interest he owed this new family of a man his wife and no children his life. He continued with this work for many years, with a constant desire of his true ambition "to be the best warrior in all the realm!". When the Kingdom of Renatus fell to the undead his new family perished in its destruction along with the capital. From within Alcibiades felt his father had been avenged who he believed was killed by the heartlander guards (not confirmed) in his protest of anger, but felt an ache in his heart for the new family who so freely saved him and reared him. He took this opportunity to board a ship fleeing Athera. After a long sail he arrived at Vailor in 1513. It is hear aged 19 and a fully grown man at this stage, Alcibiades now sets in his true desire of being the best warrior in the realm not for a sense of power but for a sense of justice. 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?. Having a rough early life my character noticed one thing. His pain was not caused by orcs but by men. This gives my character a very rare understanding towards orcs. If an orc is innocent and wrongly being attacked he will stand by the orc and fight with him. Growing up under the canon faith from his second family he became EXTREMELY religious willing to fight anyone who mocked his faith and die in any war for his faith my character has become strong hearted. His habits include friendly fighting people for practice (since he is not very good at the moment), reading and learing about ancient battles for his longing of knowledge and standing up for anyone who is being wrongly treated including an orc. He likes all people and races, he only dislike people who do harm to him, he also dislikes people who question the Canon faith in an arrogant or offensive way!

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A great warrior who is capable of standing up for anyone who is being unfairly treated.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) His only skill that he has had time develop is carpentry from his second family.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Sword fighting.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He is 6 ft, had dark brown hair, ocean blue eyes, pink in skin color and has no scars.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your metagaming definition is vague. Please add an example to ensure you understand it's meanings.

 

- Your power gaming definition is incorrect. For help with this, you may visit HERE.

 

- The current date on LoTC is 1563, so it is not possible for your character to have been born in 1496 and be 19.

 

- The Kingdom of Renatus did not exist in Athera or Vailor.

 

- Please add to your weaknesses. Try to add some non-combat based ones.

 

- Please add your skin.

Good luck on your next application!

[jamesb 218]

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