[✔] [Pending] My Truly Fixed Application

[TheSkullKnight 0]

A highlander human comes down a rocky mountain, only having the villagers noticing his armor. As he watched them laughing at him, he slides down the mountain. He was stopped by a villager, "Sorry, but we take in refugees." When he was smiling, the man spoke. "Who said I was going to live here and I'm not a refugee. Also, go die in a hole.", he said so calmly, but the villager tried to strike the man. As he slash, he noticed he was bleeding from the he strike with, now noticing the man had a dagger in his hand. Finally, the man left and that man was Azu Hollow.

In-character:

Name: Azu Hollow

Sex: Male

Race: Human, Highlander

Age: 32 years old

Biography: A highlander human found to be talented to a bow and dagger, born in the captial of Oren with his two parents and brother. One night, Azu was sleeping and smelled something. He looked out the window only to see a high amount of Assassins. The door was locked from the inside and they were banishing down the door. Soon the assassins lighted the house on fire. When his family were escaping the fire, Azu was nearly murdered by one of the assassins, but he wasn't murder and the assassin was dead by a soldier. Blood went everywhere on Azu's face. This soldier picked up Azu and brought him to safety. The soldier brougth him to his house, when soon he trained Azu to become an assassin. The next day, Azu told the soldier that his family lefted him to die and wasn't alone. After telling the Soldier, Azu was trained to become stronger, faster and smarter. After 17 years, Azu is now an assassin for 12 years straight and having a bounty of 10,000 gold due to murdering over 50 men/women with bounties. After three years passed, he was assumed to be already dead.

 Now knowing  that the people though he was dead, he went on with his journey only to noticed a man with a bounty of 6,000 gold he follows him. When he walked in a cave, Azu took a dagger and sliced his neckle only to know to claim his prize, the gold. Then, he was knocked out by a Orc. Soon, he was still alive and the Ocr was dead. The thought of killing what needed to be killed, toke his mind over. He thought of killing other people. This would soon corrupt him in insanity and destroy his soul to killing him. Soon than ever, voice appeared in his head. This voice said, "Control yourself." then disappeared. His insanity held him down from listening to the voice, but Azu broke from his insanity. To now knowing, he traveled around the world he knew he was at and slayed many undead and magical creatures that stand in his way and ambition, to set his horrible parents dead bodies on fire. He reforged a new dagger with Iron. He returned home to Felsen, Oren to find it. His horrible Parent's corspes.

Personality Traits: Cocky, Nonfriendly, Devilish(never cares)

Ambitions: To find his Mom's and Dad's corpses only to destroy them with fire.

Strengths/Talents: Bow and Arrow; Hunter; Stealth; Works in the shadows; Kills anyone with a bounty; Has over 50 kills; Forger; Unfoolable

Weakness/Inabilities: Teamwork; Sleepy; Wizards; Warriors with Shields; Defense; horrible ladiesman; Short-tempered; Uncaring

Appearance: Green eyes, Blonde hair, Skinny and slightly muscular, 138 Lbs, 6'1"

Skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/thumbnails/skullknight-8515683.png

 

Out-Character:

Account Name: TheSkullKnight

Age: 14 years old

Aware of the server being PG-13: Yes

Did you read and agree to the rules: Yes

What rules do you most agree with: All

Confussing Rules: No

How did you find out about this: A youtuber show the server and how cool it is

 

Definitions

Roleplaying: When you play or tell a story as a character set in a diiferent type of world during a boardgame or videogame.

Metagaming: Using other people outside-self information for an ingame-verison.

Power-emoting: When player to player action are used to change the style how you play. 

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings, Applicant;

Your application has been put on Pending for the following reasons;

 

• Your biography suggests that your character died and got resurrected. This would not be possible without the usage of magic. I suggest you to not have your character killed and then brought to life;
• Demon stone is not a lore-accepted item on the Lord of the Craft. Please remove the two or change them into lore-accepted materials, perhaps something like plain iron;
• Your definitions of metagaming and power-emoting are incorrect. You may use a search engine to learn about what they are. However, please do not copy-paste the definitions, as we'd love to hear them from your own words;
• Parents getting killed and the child turning into an assassin is a cliché backstory. It's acceptable but the Application Team encourages you to form a more unique backstory;
• The skin you've linked in your application has green eyes, but your appearance description states that he has blue, please fix one of the two;
• Deadly is not a personality trait, neither is "pissed". Please give us an in-depth knowledge about your character's personality. Is he kind? Caring? Short-tempered?;

 

You have 24 hours to make the necessary changes. Please notify me via Forum PMs when you've done the changes, which can be accessed from my profile.

Don't hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs for any questions/concerns you have. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

 

Congratulations on your acceptance! Please wait patiently as a GM will implement you to the server within the next few hours. While you are waiting you are more than welcome to browse the forums and/or Wiki to refresh your mind on server events and lore.

In addition, if you have any questions, or if you’d like to be mentored, feel free to visit my forums profile and send me a Private Message, and I’d be happy to help you.

 

Lastly, I strongly advise you to check the definitions of metagaming and power-emoting once again before you go ahead and start your premium roleplaying experience.

[EdgyMagey 787]

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.