[✗] [Pending] Application

[DrTwinz 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft account name?: DrTwinz
How old are you?:11
What timezone are you in?: EEST
Are you aware the server is PG-13 yes (You won’t be denied for being under 13):
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no cybering
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? No (if so we can help clear it up!):
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend told me about it
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):
Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes!
 
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?: roleplaying is when you are your own character
What is metagaming?: metagaming is using information that you character should not have
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: an example: cuts your hand from behind
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Llandir
Character’s sex: (male or female?) male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) human
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 27
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Llandir was born in Felsen,, he is a traveler like his father. His father was often traveled to Caliphate, but one day, he got a horrible sickness, almost un-curable. But they couldn't get the medicine in time to him, so they instead got a druid, to help him. But he wasn't the same, he couldn't walk normally so the next week he was found in the river, dead. Llandir was devastated, both his mother and father was dead, and he was lonely once again. Since his mother died right after he was born. Llandir didn't want to be in Caliphate, so he decided instead to go to Felsen again, to find a home. But there were no homes, so he decided to go join a military
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Llandir has a habit to throw rocks on the water, he did it often
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) An officer in a military
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) hes good at making boats
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)He gets sad when people talk about their parents, and he needs to work on talking to people
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) he is 6,5 feet tall he has dark night-ish hair
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/the-night-hunter-3324239/

[AlmondTree 418]

Greetings! I've reviewed the application and I see it necessary that you correct a few things. I will list them below and you will have 24 hours to correct these changes or the application will be denied!

-Expand your biography more, expand on the story of the father and mother perhaps? These are things that would shape someone immensely to grow up with one parent and then have him die.

 

-Your character is too tall, the max height is 6.4ft but realistically that's something very rare and I suggest making him shorter!

 

-Add some more personality traits. Throwing rocks at the water isn't a trait, why does he have that habit? Sadness, depression, anxiety? 

 

If you need any help you can always send me or any other AT member a PM!

Good luck!

[luv 3469]

I'm sorry to say applicant but you've been denied.

 

You did not make the requested changes

within the allotted time.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions, comments, or concerns please feel free to message me!

[luv 3469]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.