[✗] Jmark's Application

[Jmark 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Jmark

How old are you?:14

What timezone are you in?:Pacific Timezone (GMT-08:00)(Us & Canada)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:Combat Rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):none

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: i was trying to find roleplay servers

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):3 times

 

What is roleplaying?:it is unique character and you control all the aspects of your character whether its appearance,strengths, and actions.

What is metagaming?:metagaming is any strategy,action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribe ruleset,uses external factors to affect the game,or goes beyond the supposed limit or environment set by the game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Powergaming in roleplaying games can take several forms. One form is the deliberate creation of optimal player characters (PCs), with the aim of maximising the power the player wields in the game world by way of their avatar. This is known as min-maxing, due to the practice of balancing the PC's abilities through maximising desirable or "powerful" traits while minimising underpowered or unuseful traits.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Jerome OresBorne

Character’s sex: (male or female?)male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)farfolk/human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.): He character came from "Krinfird",he traveled from "Krinfrid" to "Lorain" and "Savoy",He was born in Sept.1,1495.

He tried to trick an elf once but he failed and was punished , he once helped an helpless little girl whose name was sha'kra who was lost .

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)He's quirks are food and seeds,he has an habit,he likes to laugh alone,he likes eating,he dislikes laziness

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)He aspires to be a knight

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) my character is good at handling a sword

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Hes weak at magic and potions

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) looks like robin hood;hes 5'5;Brown;none

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[garentoft 9265]

 

 

Hey, applicant;

Your application has been denied.

 

• Your definitions of powergaming and metagaming are copied from Wikipedia. Please use this thread to get information about the definitions, and this time write it in your own words.

• Your biography is way too short, we expect at least two lengthy paragraphs and yours is barely a paragraph. Here’s a link to our wiki for lore you can use. Also, he couldn’t have been born in September, as LoTC has it’s own special months, here’s a link to the page about it.

• Your personality traits are not personality traits, these aren’t really likes and dislikes, they’re more things like being stubborn or possibly using his hands to put emphasis on his words.

• Your character's weaknesses/strengths are very vague and cliche, there’s too many generic characters who start out as good sword fighters. They also tell you a lot about what character can and can’t do. Please write more about these.

• Your skin looks too modern, a man in a blue suit with a tie? Please pick something more like the current year, which is 1575.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions, please shoot me a PM via the forums.

 

[garentoft 9265]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.