[✗] TheRaptor5181 Application

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What’s your Minecraft account name?: TheRaptor5181

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?: EST (American)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: N. 2 under community conduct

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Me and a friend (Th3RedGamer) wanted to find a good RPG server

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

What is roleplaying?: the acting out of the part of a particular person or character

What is metagaming?: any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Levi Zano

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Highlander

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 36

Biography: (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)  Levi comes from a mainland far from Axios, never explored by the races. He landed ashore in a small boat with only supplies for himself. He seeks the aid of Erogar, a mountain dwarf. He hopes in ability to train with dwarf in hopes of coming a powerful duo of the land. They seek nothing but fortune. Maidens, or love they require none, just the hilts of their blades will do.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Quick tempered, easily distracted, hates rodents

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A powerful warrior of the land

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) teamwork, archery, fire making

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Swordsmanship, temper

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) 5', 10, brown hair, white and blue robes

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)I cannot physically change my skin, it is IMPOSSIBLE do to my MC email have been deleted. Apologies

 

Edited September 22, 2016 by TheRaptor5181
Fixing application

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Under review

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Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

• Your powergaming and metagaming definitions both have been plagiarized from online sources (Wikipedia). Plagiarism is a serious offense and is not taken lightly, resulting in an automatic denial to your application. Being caught plagiarizing again will result in a one month application ban.
• Your biography is too short, and holds little server lore within it. The Team looks for a minimum of two paragraphs for your biography, and a minimum of three instances of server lore. Try fleshing your character out more to lengthen the bio, perhaps include things such as; where did he grow up? Who were his parents? What was his living environment like? Did he have any peers; if so, how did they think of him? Et cetera.
• Your skin also is a deep redline. Try finding something more fitting of the fantasy theme of Lord of The Craft, the one you have offered is a bit too.. Modern.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

Message me with any questions.

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This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.