[✗] Thor123xyz's White list application

[Thor123xyz 0]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Thor123xyz

How old are you?: 14

What timezone are you in?: Eastern

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule against cyber bullying.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): No.

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role playing is when you pretend you are someone you aren't or take the role of someone.

What is metagaming?: It is when you know something when you aren't suppose to know.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Power emoting is when you do some you physically wouldn't be able to do.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Da'Lazar

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Kha'Pantera

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) My character doesn't remember where he came from. As a child he remembers playing with his brothers and sisters every fall around the Elder Tree. He remembers his father had a set of Gold Armor he wore when on duty.

My mother use to visit the Ro'Ah Tree while my brothers and sisters were at the Elder Tree with our father. I was born in 1555. The last thing I remember of my child hood was when I was 8 I was playing with my bow my father had brought home with him.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) A habit my character has its always checking his weapons to make sure they are in fine condition. I am usually very quiet unless I have something I need to say. I like fighting and traveling and dislike doing nothing.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) My character aspires to be a Moonblade.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) My character is a great archer, and is sneaky.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) My character needs to work on his 1 handed combat.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) My character has black fur, and is 6'0. He has several scars on his abdomen where he was cut at with a knife.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) I am a black cat with armor.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Denied.

 

-You need to actually write out your character's biography, not simply say he doesnt remember. While you're able to have your character have memory loss at a point in his life, it is not an excuse to not document his origins and biography.

 

-Your character's biography is a bit confusing. Ro'ah trees were native to Anthos, and to my knowledge havnt been seen since. Anthos was a land that was departed from about 150 years ago (or more) in-character.

 

-Your character's biography is far too short.

 

-You failed to include a screenshot of your minecraft skin.

 

-You need to balance your character's skills and weaknesses.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.