[✗] Whitelist application by ScarDaVinci

[ScarDaVinci 0]

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: My minecraft username is ScarDaVinci.

How old are you?: I'm 14 years old

What timezone are you in?: Over ecvator.

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yeah, I'm aware of PG-13.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:I have agreed.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:The rule where you could not cyberbully a another person, which I would say, is the most promosing one.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):I'm a little confused about the "almost on the breach of breaking the rule" like. If you don't break a rule, you are techinally not doing anything wrong, or?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found out about LOTC through skype and friends which played on here.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):Don't have any previous ones.

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes, I've logged in.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you are pretending to be a person, which you really are not.

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is any strategy, action or method use in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game. 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Powergaming (or power-emoting/power gaming) is a style of interacting with games-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) I want my character to be named Sorewin

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male.

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) I want him to be a dwarf. (mountain dwarf)

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) I want my character to be 99 years old.

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Sorewin was born in Kal'Nerroth. he was looked up on as a non wealthy dwarf, and got kicked out of Kal'Nerroth as an 87 year old dwarf. Sorewin have traveled to different locations, such elf homes and such, which he got denied to come into, because, Sorewin's unpopularity has reached the other species in the other lands. And that made his chance to join the other lands impossible. Sorewin was also born on the 1478 and is now 99 years old.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Sorewin is a very non arrogant dwarf (even though dwarves are known for being arrogant) but, he is also very likeable, due to his lack of arrogance, he can be liked by elves and such but, he can be a little cocky sometimes. He have a habit of pulling out very bad jokes out of his slew when someone or everyone feels sad. Sorewin dosen't like cocky elves, or elves in general which is not nice against him. But he like beer and such which other dwarves like.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Sorewin want to become like the rest of the dwarves, arrogant, greedy and a experienced miner.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Sorewin is really good at combat, he can handel the bow perfectly, same with the axe, sword and other type of objects that can do damage. Which is unuseal for dwarves to learn almost every type of weapon, since mountain dwarves are mainly into axes.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Sorewin needs to work on mining and such to become an real dwarf. and maybe to act serious in serious actions.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Sorewin looks like a ordinary dwarf, but, he is a little more dark skin then a ordinary mountain dwarf, and he also has a black beard and hair. Sorewin is around 4'o" ft.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

Edited October 2, 2016 by ScarDaVinci
I had lack of information, and had to edit the text, to fix it.

[garentoft 9265]

 

 

Hey, applicant;

Your application has been denied.

 

• Your definitions of metagaming and powergaming are plagiarised (copy-pasted). Plagiarism is strictly not allowed, as it doesn’t show whether you have a clear understanding of the definitions. This is also your first warning of plagiarism, if you plagiarise again you’ll receive a one week ban from applying. Here’s a thread you can use to get help with the definitions, but remember not to plagiarise, write it in your own words!

• Your biography lacks a little in length, we expect two lengthy paragraphs, and you have about one and a quarter. This is something that’s easily to fix, you just have to either expand more on events currently in your biography or create new events, remember, the biography is all about your character’s life until now! Here’s a link to the wiki, which you can use to get an idea of the events that have happened in the world.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

If you have any questions, send me a PM via the forums.

[garentoft 9265]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.