[✗] [Pending] SuperN13's Application

[SuperN13 0]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

 

What's your Minecraft account name?: SuperN13

 

How old are you?: 13

 

What timezone are you in?: Central Time

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What's the rule you agree to the most?: No excessive abuse or swearing

 

Are there any rules that confuse you or don't make sense?: No

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I googled good servers

 

Have you logged into the server yet?: Yes

 

DEFINITIONS

 

What is roleplaying?: Role-playing is where a person takes on the role of a fictional or real character.

 

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using past information to be better at a game.

 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Powergaming is getting the best results in a game without any regard to rules. Basically taking shortcuts.

 

IN CHARACTER INFORMATION

 

Character's Name: Ashe

 

Character's Sex: Male

 

Character's Race: High Elf

 

Character's Age: 158

 

Biography: I am Ashe, an elf. I was born in Salvus in the year 1483. As soon as I turned 100, I traveled into the world to make a name for myself. However, the Ducal Coalition interrupted my life. After that, I had the displeasure of seeing the Mountain Monarchy slaughtered brutally. Years later, I became sick with the Plague, and barely recovered.

 

I now live on Tahn in the Axios islands. I am happy there and I hope to become married soon and live a happy life with my family. At the moment, I am enlisted in the army under the King as an archer. I hate war, but I need the money that comes with a position in the military.

 

Personality Traits: Loves to read; hates war; will do anything to make peace; loves to hunt for deer and other game

 

Ambitions: Aspiring to become a king (which will probably never happen); aspires to become a leader of a town

 

Strengths/Talents: Unusually smart and strategic; fast reader; quick on his feet; exellent archer; stealthy

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hates speaking in public; hates places with a lot of people; doesn't really like people (basically a grumpy, cheerful hermit); horrible at hand-to-hand combat

 

Appearance: Waist-length blonde hair; 6 feet 8 inches tall; startling blue eyes; no scars

 

Skin: Attached below...

[Parion 1130]

 

Hello applicant!

Your application is currently pending; this means you are going to need to make a few changes before you can be accepted. Though, don't fret since you've a chance to fix this.

 

• Currently, your definitions for power-emoting, metagaming and roleplaying are not completely correct. I am going to have to ask you to fix these answers, just so I know you have a thorough understanding concerning the terms. By clicking on the words above, you'll be redirected to their wiki pages. Alternatively, you can read about all three on our definitions page. Remember to rectify these responses in your own words and not to plagiarise.
• The biography for your High Elf is somewhat unfitting for the race.  While it might not be entirely necessary for you to have a normal High Elf, it'd be nice to see some of the High Elven specific lore incorporated. Fortunately, expanding High Elven lore can be as simple as mentioning the names of their main nation or referring to significant racial attributes. The wiki and New Player Guide can provide lots of general information. For High Elves, we have plenty of easy guides and pages that are very interesting to read and can help you out when expanding your High Elven lore - everything you might need to know is kept on the [OOC] High Elven Player's Guide linked below:
   

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes required. If this is not seen to within the given time, your app will have to be denied.

If you have any questions or need further assistance, feel free to PM myself via the forums. As a leading figure of the High Elven council, I can give you plenty of advice concerning the lore and social etiquette of the race.

[Vaynth 3005]

Parion hasn't been able to come online, so I'm finishing this for him.

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 12 hours, if you apply sooner than 12 hours you will face denial.

I'm afraid your definitions still aren't accurate. Your biography also doesn't fit much with High Elven culture, and it is much too short to be acceptable. We expect at least two lengthy paragraphs. Again, you can re-apply in 12 hours from now and please take these suggested changes into consideration.

Message me on the forums if you have questions or need assistance. I would be happy to help!

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.