[✗] [Pending] VeliqNespa Application PLEASE READ EDITED 14.1.17

[VeliqNespa 0]

Hello, first I need say that: Im from Turkey. If i have a mistake, forgive me.

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: VeliqNespa

What timezone are you in?: GMT+3

How old are you?: Im 16 years old.

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes I read.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree war rules. People can't build a lot of weapons.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I can't understand Raid Rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend (I think his nick is Semihilyus) say this server.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): I logged this server and I play like a ghost. I cant write. Only past and fly.

 

What is roleplaying?: creating a charachter for yourself and acting that character in a fictional universe, thinking that fictional universe is like real life and acting upon that.Just like a theatre, but much more realistic.

What is metagaming?: Gaining IC knowledge by using OOC ways, like calling your friends from Skype to come aid you,or asking your friend about something IC

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Trying to do something that your character will not be able to do, like killing people with your thoughts.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)Abuziddin

Character’s sex: (male or female?)Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 25

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)My grandfathers were members of the folk living near to the Mountains of Nerezza, for a long time, because of the Duke's War and other conflicts, my family were always migrated to the place to another place.At last, leader of my people, Faramith Rotgreif, called every helveti to the Greifburg at Haense.So i migrated to there.

I worked heavy jobs. Building, To move stones. Then I be blacksmith. I dont like blacksmith but I like hammer. I make for me a Warhammer.

After some conflicts, i have aided my people at greifburg, within the current rebellion against Stauntons, me and my friends will fight against the enemies and i hope i will make good stuff for my friends and fullfill my goal that my grandfather at Nerezza gave it to me

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) He likes gold items (Rings, necklackes) He likes shiny weapons. He dont likes elvens and dwarves. He hates bullys. He can't speak werry well. He is brave. But he is lazy.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He want to be lord .

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) He can use warhammer really good. He is strog. He can throw arrows with ride a horse. He can use bow really good.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) He can't talk good with people. He is shy.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He has yellow, long hair. His weight 183cm. His height 80kg. He has cool mustache

Skin:

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[Jlyoko 97]

Parion isn't awake at the moment so I was asked to finish your app review:

 

Upon Review Of Your Edited App, Your Application Is...

You did not make the required changes within the time given.

 

Although you made changes to most of what needed to be changed you failed to edit your biography to an acceptable length and it's contents did not contain enough server lore.

 

You may reapply in 24 Hours. If you have any questions feel free to message me or any Application Team member and we will be glad to assist you.

[Jlyoko 97]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.