[✗] Keichi, The Brave Adventurer

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My roleplay character name: Keichi

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 30

 

Bio: When Keichi was at a young age, around 3 years old, the Holy Orenian Empire had a battle with the woodland elves, and tried to conquer their territory. His parents were close friends to the woodland elves, so were against the conquest issue. They worked with the woodland elves to help them fight off the Holy Orenian Empire. Sadly, Keichi's parents both died during the battle, however delayed the Orenian Empire long enough for elven reinforcements to arrive. Keichi's parents' last dying wish was to raise and protect their son.

         The Woodland Elves did as they were asked, and raised Keichi as one of their own. They taught him their skills with a bow, swordsmanship, which Keichi was a natural swordsman, thanks to his heartlander racial heritage. They also taught him their wood-making skills in case he ever would need them. However, Keichi was a natural-born adventurer. He could not stand staying in one place for too long. So, he asked the elective leader of the woodland elves if he could leave the city of Linandria, the current city of the woodland elves, and explore the rest of the world, so he would be eternally satisfied.

 

Race: Human, Sub-Race: Heartlander

 

Personality: Kind, gentile, loving, mildly-protective

 

Ambitions: Discover and explore all of the secrets of the world.

 

Strengths/talents: speed, hand-eye coordination, swordplay

 

Weaknesses/inabilities: strength-based opponents, too trustworthy

 

Appearance: Height: 5'3", Weight: 145lbs, Hair Color: Brown, Eye Color: Blue, Skin Color: White, Clothes: Blue Longcoat, Grey Pants, Black Boots with Yellow Straps, Light Armor, Carries One Sword that splits into Twin Blades, as well as a Bow and Arrows.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Claimed.

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for failing to use the entire whitelist application form. (found here)

- Your character's story doesn't really make sense. If the Human nation of Oren is at war with the Wood Elven people, why would the Wood Elves take in a human child and raise it as their own? Please clarify or make the needed changes on your next application.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.